| "The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence." Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:50 CDT
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Hey! Great chappie ^_^ I'm guessing the rider on the white bike is Yami...if it isn't Yami then I'm guessing it's Seto. One or the other ^_^ Please put some yami/yugi ness up soon!!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:38 CDT
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This is really, wonderfully, excellently perfect! And Yugi with guns and weapons and on an ego trip is one of the sexiest things I can imagine! Thank you for giving us this delicious glimpse of Yugi! I kind of wish Ryou and Bakura didn't have to die, but... Keep up the excellent wonderful perfect work! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: July 28, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course...the rider of the white bike is...Yami!
Lord...our Yugi sure is stubborn, isn't he? Even after all the phenomenal sex...wait, it's been 730 years...Man, he *needs* to get laid, and soon!
Seriously, I love both your stories...you've shown Yugi to be what I believe him to be-a strong, smart, cute, but sexy little guy...! I *really* want him and Yami to get together, though.*smirks* Yami is sooo sexy! I also love how you showed that he can be vulnerable with the person he loves....I know before Yugi finally admits he's deeply in love with Yami, there'll be many ups and downs....besides, who else can Yugi-chan love but the guy that can make him cum just by inserting his finger? *cackles* Great work, hon...I look forward to the next installment! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 28, 2003 13:45 CDT
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Yes...so coincidental? I can always hope... ^__^ Hurry up and post! Too much suspense is bad for your health XD
I love this story to death! Byee! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 13:34 CDT
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hey---
excellent as usual....can't wait to see a lemon. i can smell the citrusy freshness of it now!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: mortalgirl On: August 17, 2003 18:49 CDT
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weeeeeehee happy lemony ending!!
altho I will miss Yugi's perverted voice in this head hehe that thing was cool
neeee wayz.. more spoilers are never bad hehe
I look forward to this pirate thingy and Ryou is so adorable back there hehe I've come to suck yer blood.. aww how kawaii is that..
and as for Yugi sigh pwease make him only non con with yami.. i hate it when he's with anyone else :P haha enough ramblings from me
good sequal! please continue your work |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 03:12 CDT
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I have an idea who that might be but I'll keep it to myself incase I;'m wrong... Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Dragon On: July 27, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew it!!!! it WAS Mokuba!!!! er...gomen...i am sugar high at the moment. BUT YAY!!!! YOU UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAATED!!!! ^____^ I LOVE THIS ALREADY, YOU KNOW THAT!!! now for all those missed birthdays you mentioned in the fic, this is for Yuugi-kun! 730 years worth of candy!!! i know...a lot...^_^ fun. onegai update soon!!! i was grinning like...like...Jou in a candy-shop when i found out you updated! ^_^ so kawaii. please continue. ja ne!!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 18:03 CDT
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hey--
i've read your other story and i'm sorry i never reviewed. i had read the second chapter and then hadn't been able to go onto a computer for who knows how long and now i see that it was already finished. AND you have two chapters already for the sequel. you're fast. damn, you're good.....i wish i could write that quickly. but nooooo, i have to go to work everyday and attempt to drag my lazy ass out of bed when i'm trying to catch up on sleep let alone find time to start a new story.
*clears throat* so anyways, enough with my complaining.....on with the review. excellent story and the sequel already seems to be turning out just as wonderful. everything fits so neatly together like a never-ending puzzle. i love it! but in the end, i hope yugi goes back to yami.....pwease? *chibi eyes*
keep up the great work and please update soon! i can't wait to read more.
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: E On: July 27, 2003 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Yugi is so cool. How could you end the second chapter w/such a cliffhanger? This is definetely one of the best fics I ever read and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really nifty! keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Shadowpaw On: July 26, 2003 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, please update soon.
I dont wantyugi to kill yami i want them to live happily ever after and fuck like bunnies. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 11:53 CDT
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Hmmm, interesting so far. You kind-of ended the other story a little abruptly though. Oh well. This one sounds interesting. So, Yuugi can do magic now? I hope you post more soon! And good luck with you new school! |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 26, 2003 11:38 CDT
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HAHA! Jou is a little elf, and he's singing about santa. I find that really funny. Anyway, good chapter! |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 11:19 CDT
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Again is wonderful! :) Update son please! :)
~~~Cherry~~~ |
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