| "The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence." Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 10:20 CDT
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hey--
wonderful! i loved the lemon. excellent writing. yes, it was a bit anti-climatic...but ya can't have everything, ne? i still thought it was great.
i look forward to reading your new story.
keep writin'!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 07:21 CDT
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I truely love this story. And a sequel would make a lot of people happy, including me ^__^
You did a great job! and please don't stop! ^__- |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 23:04 CDT
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Lemony ending! Gotta love it! ^_^ Sequel? Yes yes yes!! :)
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: firestar On: August 17, 2003 16:57 CDT
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heyyyyyyyyyyyy! final chappy and yugi loves yami, and got his sanity back- I just love happy endings. I hope you plan on making another story, you have such talent in the writing department. well. thanks for writing. |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 15:46 CDT
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*innocently* What happend to the little voice in yugi's head?
lolz
laughing like a maniac!
dunno y
but as u look into my head:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~
IT'S OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT CAN'T BBBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: E On: August 17, 2003 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was alright. I find it funny that just before the puzzle is mentioned I think about how I kept forgetting to ask about the puzzle and then wallah the puzzle has been there but ignored all this time. It's sad that the murderous Yugi has gone into retirement but how you solved that was pretty good. I can't wait for your next masterpiece. Though I hope that there is a sequel one day. |
Reviewed By: E On: August 13, 2003 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a terrible reveiwer. I love what you write I'm just very lazy and count on other people to do the reveiws sorry. Any way everything was great. Yugi running off screaming and then slamming into the wall was great. Though I was waiting for him to use that power to blow away the wall, that he used it on Yami was cool, though I was expecting that to happen eventually I didn't think Yami would be the first to get a taste of it. It seems you almost have this story done, but before you end it is there a possibility that we would get a glimpse of what Yami thinks about being in love w/a partially insane vampire serial killer? I can actually see Yugi claiming that all vampire's are scum and need to be killed except Yami offcourse he's different. I have seen racist peaple actually curse one race while being married to somebody of said race. Besides I don't really want the homicidal Yugi to take a permanent vacation. Its a part of him and its therepy for him. Can't wait for the next update though I hope it was an exageration when you said a whole week till the next update. I really look forward to every new chapter. |
Reviewed By: E On: August 13, 2003 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a terrible reveiwer. I love what you write I'm just very lazy and count on other people to do the reveiws sorry. Any way everything was great. Yugi running off screaming and then slamming into the wall was great. Though I was waiting for him to use that power to blow away wall, that he used on Yami was cool though I was expecting that happen eventually I think Yami would be the first. It seems you almost have this story done, but before you end it is there a possibility that we would get a glimpse of what Yami think about being in love w/a partially insane vampire serial killer? I can actually see Yugi claiming that all vampire are scum and need to be killed except Yami offcourse he's different. I have seen racist peaple actually curse one race while being married to somebody of said race. Besides I don't really want the homicidal Yugi to take a permanent vacation. Its a part of him and its therepy for him. Can't wait for the next update though I hope it was an exageration when you said a whole till the next update. I really look forward for a new chapter. |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: August 09, 2003 19:54 CDT
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Nice lil chappie. No lemon (darn) but good still! I'd love to read a pirate fic. Sounds interesting. Partly cuz i watched Pirates of the caribbean and it was one of my favourite movies this summer, and partly cuz im confident that you'll be able to make it good. well, until next time. Bye! |
Reviewed By: No-name critic On: August 09, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the writing that I've read ever. I would have to say that your material is one of the best I've ever seen. Proper grammar, orginality,humor, slight horror, and keep the yaoi at a fair level to keep the story flowing. Very well done. I look foward to reading more of your chapters and stories. Well done. |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 14:23 CDT
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Why would you describe your writing as the sh word? I actually like it even though I despise the curse words. I try to look past them, but I can't. |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 11:58 CDT
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one week chappies! Oh no! ^^; it's okay, as long as you update! This story is so great! I hope Yugi doesn't kill Yami! They are meant to be together! It would be just so wrong! Oh well, even if he does kill him in the end, this is still a wonderful fic and I would still love it no matter what!! ^_^ continue as soon as you can please!! |
Reviewed By: firestar On: August 09, 2003 11:41 CDT
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*sighs in fustration* evil cliffy. please continue. You know I like that little voice in the back of yugi's head, he's cool. |
Reviewed By: amunra On: August 09, 2003 09:19 CDT
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Oh, I forgot: I would love to read more of your writing... I'm not sure I can get into pirate stories, but I'd love to give it a shot. |
Reviewed By: amunra On: August 09, 2003 09:17 CDT
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Whoohoo! another chapter. Poor Yugi... those memories are going to drive him insane. Yami is already in love with Yugi, but I wonder if he were to really know what happened to Yugi, if it would help him understand him a little more.
I shudder at the thought of the sun rising later than it does now. Poor, defenseless humans... ^_^. Review done, now where's my chapter?? ;o) |
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