| "Carefully Out of Reach" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Cooooome baaaaaaaaack
Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: April 25, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Please please please come back. I want more!
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Title: Carefully Out of Reach Ch4
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: September 07, 2003 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story...even though Aya is sick and will probably die(crosses fingers hoping for a miracle) I think you write very well...it's coherent making the story easy to follow...My only complaint would be that the chapter came out too slowly!!!Please don't make us wait long for the next one:-) |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 09:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aaaaaahh, Yohji found Aya...what will happen...will he know that Aya has cancer Ó_Ò? Aya having cancer...I still can't believe it Ó_Ò...will he really die ???? *sniiiiifffles*
Ja *NEXT NEXT* ^.^
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
MAH! Jerk * kick* your almost as bad as Nekojita-sama! * teary eyes* I love this fic...* sniffle* so please continue...pweeese! |
Reviewed By: amanda On: August 20, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, chapter 3! i read your story on fanfic.net and immediately liked it. i was wondering what would happen after aya left. i still cant believe it...aya...cancer...youji...smoke... *tears in eyes* is aya gonna die?! please please please update soon! i must know what happens! will youji and the others find aya soon? 'cause a reunion i would not wanna miss! write more. |
Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! you updated! I'm soooo happy, but now I have to beat you because your chapters are too short! * cries* You'd better update this by saturday night, or I am hunting you down. |
Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!!! * glomp* i love reading angsty aya fics! And this one is superb, the style of writing is unique and enthralling. I hope you update this soon, other wise i'l have to threaten you with my horde of rabid cross dressing farfies...and believe me they do bite ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: August 04, 2003 18:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hhm, Aya is leaving Weiß...that's not so good...Aya is having lung cancer *uhm uhm* that isn't good either Ó_Ò !
Well, I'm curious to know what will come next so, please continue soon ^_____^...and something new of you wouldn't be bad either *grin*!
Ja
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Waaaahhhhhhh!!! How could you DO that??? Aya, having cancer??? *sniffles*
And poor Yohji... *shakes head* I feel so sorry for him... I hope that he'll be able to track Aya down soon?
Ummmm... Is it too early to ask for another chapter yet? *grin*
And thank you for the dedication!!! *hugs* Oh, and before I forget, the muse says "Hi" too... *edges away carefully*
~Mini |
Reviewed By: BalineseYohji@aol.com On: August 03, 2003 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome once again! But darn your cliffhangers!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is sooooooooooooo cool. LOL Yes, I am sadistic and like reading bishounen torture stories. :.:evil laugh:.: E-mail me when you update again? Onegai? :.:watery eyes:.: |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just loved the catheter line in this chapter!! Now I'm waiting to see what happens next, and Weiss' reaction to Aya's disappearance. |
Reviewed By: In Awe On: July 27, 2003 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!! Why are you trying to kill my soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, that means that your story is droolably awesome and its just.......awesome! You do a great job staying in character, and the plot is original and engaging. I LOVE IT! And I can't wait to see what happens! Umm... could you E-mail me when you update.......please!??! If you do, my address is BalineseYohji@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Got me hooked. Even with some spelling and grammar errors, it was absolutely fantabulous! Just have someone else proof read it or use a grammar check (if your word processor has one). I really enjoyed the story, though. Can't wait until you post more. You have a very good writing style. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: July 24, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOOD^^...Aya x Yohji is always good ^_^ (well most of the time ^_~) and I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapters...I want to know what will happen next ^_______^...soooon!
Ja
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: July 24, 2003 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great start! Keep it coming! |
