| "Those Two Years" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crazy bout Ryou On: March 02, 2004 17:37 CST
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2 things. 1-can you put Ryou in? 2-awesome story, you have to continue!
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Reviewed By: Shadows_Of_The_Past [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fanfic for a while, and I like it a lot ^-^ Not a real big fan of the lemon, but that's just me. I had one question, tho... I checked FF.net for this fic a while ago, and the chapter "Of Dreams and Books" was already up. Are you planning on doing that with all the chapters? Thanks for writing this series! ^-^
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Reviewed By: SilverKitsune!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Note: i am really Toki Mirage, but mm.org is being a bitch *curses continuously underbreath* and won't let me sign in properly!! it's REALLY starting to GET UNDER MY SKIN!!! *clears throat* on with the review::: if my sources are correct, Mahaado is the name of his priest, and he sacrifices himself to become the eternal protector of his pharoah. he possessed the millenium ring, i believe, but i am still unsure as to what his real name is. >.< can't wait to get to that part in the english manga ^^ n e who, CONTINUE THIS FIC OR I SHALL CAST A CURSE UPON THEE!!! *coughs* update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ling Ling On: February 21, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this story. You make sound so real I though that J.K. Rowling and whoever the author of Yu-Gi-Oh banded together and created this story. Keep up the great work and update real soon. You can count on me for support! Until next time, Chao! ^__~
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 03:17 CST
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oh, and ps. phoenix was spelt right *blushes* yah, i know, i'm stupid. *turns crimson* i'm embarrassed enough as it is, so dont rub it in -_-
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 03:15 CST
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how many times must i review this story to get you to upload??!!!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS ALREADY *not a very patient person* I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR AT LEAST FIVE MONTHS!!!!
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Title: Slythrin fits (sorry for any misspellings)
Reviewed By: Sharon (yugiohgirl03 not in the mood to sign in) On: December 07, 2003 23:03 CST
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Slytherin fits Yugi pretty well if you think about it, all slytherins have a mask that they need to hide behind and so does Yugi, it is the same as the one that he used when his Yami and friends were ignoring him. Kinda hard to break habits isnt it Yugi? Just a thought Seperent Night Dragon would fit Draco Malfoy perfectly. Keep it coming. A++++++++++++!!!!!!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: jwqtpie On: December 02, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it!!! keep going!!! please!!!!
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Title: pleazzz...........
Reviewed By: lunarian apocolipse On: November 29, 2003 11:13 CST
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please keep writing it is a sence of purpose to keep people interested please finish and type in be fore saterday
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Title: this is awsome!
Reviewed By: pharaohsQUEEN On: November 18, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is sooo great! when are you going to filter Yami's diary back inot the story? i can't wait for that lil topic! also im all into Yuugi as a professor! *~UPDATE SOON~*
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 15:44 CST
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when are you going to update i love this fic even rereading...perfect. UPDATE NOW
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 19:41 CST
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i will be your editor if you want, and if you don't mind, i will also change your grammar a titch. ^_- if you don't like what i change, then just ignore what i did; but if you DID like the changes, then it'd be my pleasure to help ^-^ p.s. (on your other story, phoenix is actually spelt Pheonix) or is it not? i don't know. i'd have to look it up, but i'm PRETTY sure. anyway, ignore me ^_^' p.s.s. please let me know right away if you want me to edit your stuff p.s.s.s. if you're too lazy to look up my email, then here it is: solarstar5@hotmail.com p.s.s.s.s. the lazy part was NOT a pun! Toki ^_-
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 05:49 CST
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Need more what happens after yugi tells nefertiti (sorry cant spell) about his relationship with the melinum items...when is he going to forgive yami...they both deserve to be together especially after the vision with the necklace after he got the wand...and one thing for your yugi, he had better be careful with that wand he doesnt want to alert the others to his location. Great Fic!!!!
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Reviewed By: shadow_demon18b On: October 18, 2003 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update soon I realy like this story.
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Reviewed By: RainOwl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greta story! I would have given you a full ten on the enjoyment factor, but I don't like cliffies! write more soon please!
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