| "Well-Hung By Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: mopko On: November 19, 2004 02:38 CST
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Great chapter
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Title: BigSir
Reviewed By: BigSir On: November 19, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you should have Ranma get busy with more of the senshis. Just to spice it up. Like add Venus and Saturn like you did in "Payback". ;) Good story btw.
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Title: MOORREE!
Reviewed By: C-Rose On: October 23, 2004 09:26 CDT
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Begs for a new chapter! Gets down on knees and BEGS for a new chatper! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Gnomy On: August 08, 2004 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this for the sex, and I stayed for the story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kaliban On: April 18, 2004 13:44 CDT
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Dude! when are you gonna update this! this is getting fun :D
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Reviewed By: Random person On: March 31, 2004 14:04 CST
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I enjoyed reading your story, which was refreshing. I was getting so bored with lemons that I would end up skipping the actual lemon parts and reading the plots (if one was even offered. I think that you avoided the common mistake of either piling on so much sex that it became a contest to write how many positions you could think of and still giving it a unique discription. I was entertained when it was plotless and even more excited at the little edge of plot that was starting to develop. Please continue this fic.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You promised that there wouldn't be a plot! But I'll forgive you if you keep this going in the direction it's going in. :) That is all for now.
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Reviewed By: C. Rose On: February 14, 2004 07:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta admit that I really like this story. It's one of the few that hasn't bored me to tears. Ranma seems to be losing it completely and I find that odd even if his Ki flows have altered in such a dramatic way. Please hurry up with the next chapter, I want to see what's going to happen when Ranma's Ki suddenly makes the girls around blow. They have to be feeling it unconsciously,just look how Nabiki reacted. Even Kasumi was affected.
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Reviewed By: NC17 On: January 29, 2004 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got better and better as i read....good work son
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 27, 2004 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Unlike a previous reviewer who obviously ignored the story summary that was explicitly given by the author and the fact that the genre listings did not include such "deep" subjects such as drama, I prefer to judge stories by what the autor sets out to do. In my opinion, this story is within the top 10% as far as accomplishing what is stated. ' ' Anyhow here are some ideas to help inspire you to write more for this story: check out the Master's Way from addventure for ideas to stick into Happi's Book which can be found at this address: http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/frecent.php?tag=Master%27s+Way ' ' Maybe also decide if the opponents of the Sailors have some common origin or source of information. It could make for an interesting comparison of different forms of "perversion styles".
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Rion (rion1337) On: January 22, 2004 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. WarpWizard, your quality of writing is beginning to slip again. Much like it did with 'Payback.' What I'd like to see, is some more originality in your works, not just orgy-after-orgy. It begins to wear off, most readers with a brain don't just want to see sex and sex, they want plot, they want to get involved with the characters and feel what they're feeling. Those are the characteristics of a good piece of work, this is what you need to do. The next project you undergo, I'd like you to take these under-wing and put them to good use. With your skills as a writer, it shouldn't be -too- hard. Not many errors on your part, Grammar-Wise, just the plot. Otherwise, it's decent.
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: January 16, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable reading
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Reviewed By: mopko On: January 13, 2004 08:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Henti bake On: January 12, 2004 05:03 CST
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All I have to say is Please wright more, and more, and more.
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Reviewed By: Henti bake On: January 12, 2004 05:02 CST
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