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Title: Sweet as hell
Reviewed By: jwdr04 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sweet as hell. But needs more chapters {i know i'm a greedy bastard}
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Reviewed By: Eliar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update it plz plz plz plz plz.... plzzz!!!
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Reviewed By: Denisemasonp On: September 09, 2005 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome!!!YOU NEED TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!Tell me when it comes out!!!!!
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Reviewed By: claws1 On: July 30, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Well…we warmed up with a few all-you-can-eat restaurants. Pops even cried afterwards, said it was one of the greatest things he'd ever seen. The owners didn't seem so happy though…one of them something about this being the wrong week to quit sniffing glue…" Well done, i'll have to see if you have any non-lemon fiction posted
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Reviewed By: Phil Denning On: July 18, 2005 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanx. Really enjoyed reading. Thank you for making this both hentai and a 'paragon of responsibility.' I love it that Ranma's danger sense goes off when 'any' of his fiances get romantic -- and that he has to find Makoto (or Yuka and Sayuri) to rescue himself from the danger. One of the things I love the most about Ranma is how much it makes anyone look at their prejudices about 'male and female.' Four chapters and Makoto still hasn't seen Ranma's transformation... Can a normal female still satisfy once you've had a senshi? Can you see the look on Nabiki's face (or perhaps Akane's) in the aftermath.. "Yuck, like lying on a dead fish!" Or perhaps Happosai's method of self pleasure is due to the fact that normal females can't vaginaly engage a BBOH master without becoming injured? There must be some reason pages were devoted to 'head massage!' (Loved that double-entendre) Ah crap, probably wasting too much logic on a self indulgent piece of fun. Again, thank you. Twas very fun to read! pdenning at weber dot edu
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: May 24, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very amusing way of doing things. I like your style alot. FYI, Yang is actually the female side, Yin is male. No offense intended. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a very good lemon story and a piece of art that all should see too!!! I can't say anything wrong about this fic. I only can pepper you with questions... Like: Will Setsuna see Ranma in the future? If so. What then? Will she mistake Ranmas escapades for Happosai? Will the Senshi discuss that subject of magic? Will Ranma get more problems? Will there be another silly Hentai-Demon? Has Nodoka installed a Video-camera in Ranmas apartment? Will Happosai teach Ranma a lesson? Will Ranma use the BBOH more? Hopefully Ranma and Makoto will go steady. Still there is no shield that can save him from these Problems. Would you please continue this wonderful fic!!!
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Reviewed By: John Surber On: November 27, 2004 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. This is a nice blend of Lemon, comedy, action, and a little plot plot throw in. What's next though? Ranma tells Makoto, Yuka and Sayuri about each other, they meet at his apartment, have sex with each other to tease him, have sex with his girl form, and later secretly go off to meet his mom to discuss prospective girls they know who would make good additions to Ranma's harem, and make it acceptable to the government and society?
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Reviewed By: L On: November 23, 2004 18:13 CST
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"all your martial arts are belong to us?" *raises eyebrows* "all your base are belong to us"...
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Reviewed By: Anthraxus the Oinoloth On: November 22, 2004 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Simply wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have continued this in the right direction and it is much appreciated. Until the next time. P.s. I rarely give out "10"s so please don't be offended (also ignore this if it is a double post)
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Title: Chap 4
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Warpwizard My hat ios off to thee, not only was this intruiging but DAMN well hillarioius too Mwahahahahaha Gendo bashiong Ah La Happosai too funny ! Heh he would LURV Misato or Rei ^____________________^ Keep up the entertaining and thought provoking work Shadow Megatron!
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: November 19, 2004 21:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Another fine chapter. This story is just so much fun to read.
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Reviewed By: daniel_gudman On: November 19, 2004 20:50 CST
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It's pretty funny... just Tuesday I was trolling through Mediaminer looking for something to read and I came across this. I really really like the way you write, but I was a little bummed 'cuz it looked like you hadn't updated anything since about February. Then you turn around and update. That's pretty cool. As for the "depth vs. smut" debate that seems to be raging between your reviewers, well... the smut kinda is the plot. Now that Makoto is technically Ranma's boyfriend, will she feel betrayed if he... interacts... with other girls? And how will the other Sailor Senshi deal with him? I'd imagine them getting in line to either go up against his Anything Goes style, or... well, getting in line to go up against his Anything Goes style. Just a little differently, that's all. I think you're doing a good job of delivering a good plot through the... action scenes. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gnomy On: November 19, 2004 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
but the damn thing was like having a second stomach: it constantly wanted to be *fed*. Best line EVER!
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