| "Well-Hung By Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 27, 2004 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Unlike a previous reviewer who obviously ignored the story summary that was explicitly given by the author and the fact that the genre listings did not include such "deep" subjects such as drama, I prefer to judge stories by what the autor sets out to do. In my opinion, this story is within the top 10% as far as accomplishing what is stated. ' ' Anyhow here are some ideas to help inspire you to write more for this story: check out the Master's Way from addventure for ideas to stick into Happi's Book which can be found at this address: http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/frecent.php?tag=Master%27s+Way ' ' Maybe also decide if the opponents of the Sailors have some common origin or source of information. It could make for an interesting comparison of different forms of "perversion styles".
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Reviewed By: Rion (rion1337) On: January 22, 2004 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. WarpWizard, your quality of writing is beginning to slip again. Much like it did with 'Payback.' What I'd like to see, is some more originality in your works, not just orgy-after-orgy. It begins to wear off, most readers with a brain don't just want to see sex and sex, they want plot, they want to get involved with the characters and feel what they're feeling. Those are the characteristics of a good piece of work, this is what you need to do. The next project you undergo, I'd like you to take these under-wing and put them to good use. With your skills as a writer, it shouldn't be -too- hard. Not many errors on your part, Grammar-Wise, just the plot. Otherwise, it's decent.
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: January 16, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very enjoyable reading
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Reviewed By: mopko On: January 13, 2004 08:02 CST
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Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Henti bake On: January 12, 2004 05:03 CST
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All I have to say is Please wright more, and more, and more.
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Reviewed By: Henti bake On: January 12, 2004 05:02 CST
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Reviewed By: NOvapp On: January 11, 2004 18:34 CST
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Great stuff get the next chapter out quick
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Title: Chap 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this EMENSELLY I wait tortouruslly for more Please for the love of god,don't wait so long to update!
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Title: Self Indulgent Indeed
Reviewed By: Tiek Mo Shet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I had heard that this was WW's pure sex, and for the first one and a half chapters I could see that. But during the last half of the second one I saw a bit of plot start to peek out, you just can't help yourself can you. You can't just write about to people fucking without giving it some story can you? Not that I'm complaining mind you. All in all it's an interesting read, does it's job, and it was fun. I've never seen Sailor Moon but I still liked this fic, as always, good work.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say. Nice and good clean lemon through and through. Now I want to see if this "relationship' can develop with the Sailor scouts secrets plus Ranma's curse. Also how will Ranma deal with his fiance's now? Will he make love to them or hook up with Makoto who I know can wipe the fllor with all of them. Maybe a multiple marriage thing might work.
Or, are more senshei being affected by this as well? Will Tenchi or Keiichi, or Keitaro be drawn in as well? What will their perspective love interest think of that?
Hmmmm?
dennisud |
Reviewed By: okonic On: August 23, 2003 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I had actually been thinking to myself where have all the good lemons gone. It seems like their used to be so many more people who wrote good lemon fanfiction. Now a days their just seem to be too many people who just want to slap some piece of garbage together just so they can say they wrote a lemon. "Check the tmffa if you doubt me." So I am always pleasantly suprised to find warp wizard has added to one of the stories. Gives me something I can truly just sit back and enjoy. What great about this story is that it is well written and well thought out and proofread. Please, please please keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: cloud On: August 22, 2003 02:15 CDT
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ok there is a problem in the chapter 2 my guess is that you mean for this to be about sailor jupiter but in chapter 2 you call her Uranus more then a few times if you edit that it should be a very good thing. |
Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll On: August 12, 2003 10:04 CDT
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LOL!
Great one shot. |
Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing better than hot chicks getting screwed silly. Now all we need is some sex scenes and this thing will be cooking. |
Reviewed By: Carlos Negrão On: August 03, 2003 12:09 CDT
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Can't say much yet, you will probably need to post next chapter before good reviews.
Hope it turns at least almost as good as Payback, I'm only reading this because you wrote.
I almost never read fics from any anime other than Eva, and never ever saw Ranma. |
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