"Well-Hung By Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anthraxus the Oinoloth On: November 22, 2004 03:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wonderful! Simply wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:56 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You have continued this in the right direction and it is much appreciated. Until the next time. P.s. I rarely give out "10"s so please don't be offended (also ignore this if it is a double post)
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Title: Chap 4 Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 05:43 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Warpwizard My hat ios off to thee, not only was this intruiging but DAMN well hillarioius too Mwahahahahaha Gendo bashiong Ah La Happosai too funny ! Heh he would LURV Misato or Rei ^____________________^ Keep up the entertaining and thought provoking work Shadow Megatron!
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: November 19, 2004 21:42 CST Comment/Review: Another fine chapter. This story is just so much fun to read.
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Reviewed By: daniel_gudman On: November 19, 2004 20:50 CST Comment/Review: It's pretty funny... just Tuesday I was trolling through Mediaminer looking for something to read and I came across this. I really really like the way you write, but I was a little bummed 'cuz it looked like you hadn't updated anything since about February. Then you turn around and update. That's pretty cool. As for the "depth vs. smut" debate that seems to be raging between your reviewers, well... the smut kinda is the plot. Now that Makoto is technically Ranma's boyfriend, will she feel betrayed if he... interacts... with other girls? And how will the other Sailor Senshi deal with him? I'd imagine them getting in line to either go up against his Anything Goes style, or... well, getting in line to go up against his Anything Goes style. Just a little differently, that's all. I think you're doing a good job of delivering a good plot through the... action scenes. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gnomy On: November 19, 2004 12:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: but the damn thing was like having a second stomach: it constantly wanted to be *fed*. Best line EVER!
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Reviewed By: mopko On: November 19, 2004 02:38 CST Comment/Review: Great chapter
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Title: BigSir Reviewed By: BigSir On: November 19, 2004 00:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Dude, you should have Ranma get busy with more of the senshis. Just to spice it up. Like add Venus and Saturn like you did in "Payback". ;) Good story btw.
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Title: MOORREE! Reviewed By: C-Rose On: October 23, 2004 09:26 CDT Comment/Review: Begs for a new chapter! Gets down on knees and BEGS for a new chatper! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Gnomy On: August 08, 2004 03:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I started reading this for the sex, and I stayed for the story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kaliban On: April 18, 2004 13:44 CDT Comment/Review: Dude! when are you gonna update this! this is getting fun :D
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Reviewed By: Random person On: March 31, 2004 14:04 CST Comment/Review: I enjoyed reading your story, which was refreshing. I was getting so bored with lemons that I would end up skipping the actual lemon parts and reading the plots (if one was even offered. I think that you avoided the common mistake of either piling on so much sex that it became a contest to write how many positions you could think of and still giving it a unique discription. I was entertained when it was plotless and even more excited at the little edge of plot that was starting to develop. Please continue this fic.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 15:52 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You promised that there wouldn't be a plot! But I'll forgive you if you keep this going in the direction it's going in. :) That is all for now.
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Reviewed By: C. Rose On: February 14, 2004 07:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I gotta admit that I really like this story. It's one of the few that hasn't bored me to tears. Ranma seems to be losing it completely and I find that odd even if his Ki flows have altered in such a dramatic way. Please hurry up with the next chapter, I want to see what's going to happen when Ranma's Ki suddenly makes the girls around blow. They have to be feeling it unconsciously,just look how Nabiki reacted. Even Kasumi was affected.
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Reviewed By: NC17 On: January 29, 2004 18:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Got better and better as i read....good work son
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