| "Forever More" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: efreet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rather like this angle. I think you have a good handle on Vegeta's thought processes. I do hope you update soon. I have a feeling I'm going to enjoy your work.
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Title: Jubei_chan (Vbabe)
Reviewed By: Jubei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Story! I enjoyed much! Please write more! |
Title: Review
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great fic! I like it and can't wait to see what you put out next chapter! Hey could you email me when you post? Its b_chan2007@yahoo.com ! Thanx and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Lauren On: August 02, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am the only one that actually knows the person that wrote this fan fic!!!! Hey Amanda....now to get serious I like your fan fic alot alothough I am more into the Trunks and Pan get togethers....I will read the ocasionall B/V one though!! I love your writing but you need to get some lemon action in hurr!!! lol I love you!! |
Reviewed By: AmandaJUne On: July 31, 2003 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the begin of the story. Please come out with the next chapter soon.
p.s if you could e-mail when you great next chapet out or just to chat about dragonballz e-mail at amandajune45@aol.com |
Reviewed By: tamela On: July 30, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a little short for just one chapter
you should really keep the rating down until you get some actual lemons on the fic itself
your grammer and wording were just a little off
i am the first reviewer
yay! |
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