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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 23:59 CST
Comment/Review:
finish this
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: free-sprit as allways, to lazy to log in On: August 19, 2005 09:05 CDT
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omg???!!?? you're gonan finnish this, right? I love it! you can't just stop right there! It's not fair! please please finnish it! pretty please? love iyt
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Title: Wonderful Story
Reviewed By: Jody [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great fic I had to give you a ten out of ten for everything. I just absolutely had to write you a review since you always take the time to write one for me. This Bulma and Vegeta story is really really good and as already shaped itself into a little interesting well written piece of fiction. I think Bulma and Vegeta both are so well written in this fic. I just can't wait to read more. Please keep it up. Jody
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Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 01, 2004 23:42 CDT
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Hm...this is a interesting story. *Look at maccam's review*....*Wack maccam on his/her head* this story isn't follow the saga that much at all...Hey! where is Tru... Oh, There he is. Xiahou Fumi:Yes! Vegeta now can claim Bulma!*Does the happy dance* Komachi Ayako: Wait a moment! Where is Piccolo and Gohan at!? And did Trunk just beat the heck out of King Cold and Frieza without go Super Sayian!? Yes, He did Miss Obvious... Komachi Ayako: Why do I get call that sometimes!? ...Because you sometime state the obvious. Komachi Ayako:...............True.
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Title: Forever More"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know if i wanted to read what the saga was i would just put the tape in my tv and watch..all your doin is recapping what happen.and we already know.please come up with somthing else.it's sad!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 11:11 CDT
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Now you've cleared the path for Vegeta, but is it going to be that simple? Probably not! Good job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia On: May 26, 2004 10:59 CDT
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This looks like fun! Please write more I'm really enjoying it! Your comedic talent shines.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a very good job with this. It's not easy to write a B/V get-together... at least not a good one, but you are well on your way.
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Title: Chap 5
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and how it is going! Keep up the great work I love watching how you turn this story out! Keep up the great work, you know I love your work! b-chan2007
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Title: I have one annoying request !:-)
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 28, 2004 20:03 CDT
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MORE! Glad you updated. I was waiting on your chapters. Good look with AP stuff and don't neglect your readers for too long! Interesting how you put Master Roshi into this famous scene (I love the old perv!) debbiechan
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: Typicalteen (sorry not logged in atm) On: March 29, 2004 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic and I'm sorry that I wasn't signed in while writing you a review, but for a start it's very excellent. Continue on please, I look forward to reading your upcoming chapters ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Fire Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 19:20 CST
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like the story a lot, but its too short. u have to update soon. im real curious about whats going to happen next.
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 14:46 CST
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This is fun! I finally can read get-togethers again! This is a very good job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Even thought we all know how it end, *winks* the journey is always fun!
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Title: like it!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: February 17, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
:-) I'm addicted to B/V fics and especially like the traditional ones that stay in character and don't tease themselves too far outside the Toriyama world. I live for details like the chip Frieza implanted in Vegeta's brain! And your other little fill in the hole explanations that you've worked so easily into the story. Nice, efficient writing style (I should know--I'm a published author who happens to be a secret DBZ freak!); it's especially fluid for someone who's only in high school! You've got an ear for narrative--KEEP WRITING! BEST OF LUCK (and looking fwd to furture chapters) Debbiechan
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter! LOL, as you go on with your story it seems to keep getting better and better! I look forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the good work, you know I love your work! b-chan2007
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