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Reviewed By: Lizzy318 On: December 29, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an very very good story so far. Please update soon I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter, I'm sorry it took me awhile to beta-read it for you! Keep up the good work and get the next chapter out soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 02:02 CST
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oh... side bar comment... from the peanut gallery... videl lover is a LOSER... who needs to learn to be nice and that her comments piss ppl like me off bc I think it makes her sound like she's in second grade. Common ppl if you aren't going to criticize constructively... stfu and if you don't know what that means its a very mean way to say keep your big trap closed
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 02:00 CST
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I liked it... I want to read more... so update... you want a review well here you go... it's already funny just make it come faster... ok... so really... I'm not forcing you to write faster I just had to do that after you saying that reviews make you write faster... so good stuff good luck and have a merry christmas.
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Reviewed By: Videl Lover On: December 19, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic sucks! Vegeta is such a loser! He doesn't love Bulma! And what was she saying, bout him being gorgeous? HE'S UGLY! You better quit writing this shit before I puke!
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Reviewed By: Meagan O'Leary On: December 19, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, forgot to say keep writing. I couldn't believe you started this fanfic resently! Keep going please:)
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Reviewed By: Meagan O'Leary On: December 19, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fanfic. I love Vegeta and Bulma fics, and Veggie is my favorite character. Anyway,...I like the way you write, just the way you put the words down, or the things you write. I like the facts that you have. Also, I like that you didn't make Yamcha a cheating B-stard. In so many fanfics, I see that Yamcha cheats on her and I'm tired of it. I think they just grew apart. Well, I don't want to tell you what to do, just please don't make Yamcha cheat on her, please? It's your story, do what you want. I'm a fanfic writer myself :)
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Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only one word comes to mind after reading your fic...WOW!!!!!! Your story is so COOL! UPDATE A.S.A.P., plllleeeassseeee!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I finally decide to check out your fic. Sorry it took so long. Heehee. Anyways, I love it so far. They are attracted to each other already, which is rare, Geta usually doesn't admit that he finds her attractive until a few chappies into the fic. I like how you get right to the point. Well, the fic is great so far. Please update soon. Oh, and thank you for reviewing my fic so many times. I really appreaciate it. It's kept me going. I'll be updating soon, so keep an eye out. Ja ne. ~MistressChaos~
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: November 28, 2003 06:06 CST
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Please don't stop writing. You have a lot of potential. Itis always dificult when you start writing and post that fist fic. You sit around, waiting for feedback and get so discouraged when none comes. It happened to me when I first started. It happens to everyone. Anyway, please continue... and I will try to review like a good little reader. If you would like more feedback from me about the story, you can email me at phantomscribe72@yahoo.com.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter! I'm glad you decided to continue on with your story! Keep up the good work, can't wait to see your next chapter! b-chan2007
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Reviewed By: SaiyanGal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 17:19 CST
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Pretty good start. Me like! :)
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Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Well you have reviewed me so many times that I just had to check if you maybe had a Fic and YOU DO! And it's good too. Hope there are a lot of twists in the story. And Cliffy`s are always good, makes people (me) want more. I'll keep an eye out for your fic Chiara writter of Stealing your heart and your kingdom
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Reviewed By: Little Tenshi On: November 14, 2003 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUST LOVEEEEEE YOU'RE STORY, you're the only one who didn't forget about the nameks, in every story their gone. PLEASE FINSIH IT SOON ^^ Have fun writing it by the way ^^
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Title: Ooh I like!
Reviewed By: Crazy Chi Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 10:41 CST
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I loved this fic! It captures what I fail at in fanfics: the charm of the No ouji! ^___^ ~ cheech
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