| "Forever More" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meagan O'Leary On: December 19, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fanfic. I love Vegeta and Bulma fics, and Veggie is my favorite character. Anyway,...I like the way you write, just the way you put the words down, or the things you write. I like the facts that you have. Also, I like that you didn't make Yamcha a cheating B-stard. In so many fanfics, I see that Yamcha cheats on her and I'm tired of it. I think they just grew apart. Well, I don't want to tell you what to do, just please don't make Yamcha cheat on her, please? It's your story, do what you want. I'm a fanfic writer myself :)
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Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only one word comes to mind after reading your fic...WOW!!!!!! Your story is so COOL! UPDATE A.S.A.P., plllleeeassseeee!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I finally decide to check out your fic. Sorry it took so long. Heehee. Anyways, I love it so far. They are attracted to each other already, which is rare, Geta usually doesn't admit that he finds her attractive until a few chappies into the fic. I like how you get right to the point. Well, the fic is great so far. Please update soon. Oh, and thank you for reviewing my fic so many times. I really appreaciate it. It's kept me going. I'll be updating soon, so keep an eye out. Ja ne. ~MistressChaos~
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: November 28, 2003 06:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Please don't stop writing. You have a lot of potential. Itis always dificult when you start writing and post that fist fic. You sit around, waiting for feedback and get so discouraged when none comes. It happened to me when I first started. It happens to everyone. Anyway, please continue... and I will try to review like a good little reader. If you would like more feedback from me about the story, you can email me at phantomscribe72@yahoo.com.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter! I'm glad you decided to continue on with your story! Keep up the good work, can't wait to see your next chapter! b-chan2007
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Reviewed By: SaiyanGal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good start. Me like! :)
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Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Well you have reviewed me so many times that I just had to check if you maybe had a Fic and YOU DO! And it's good too. Hope there are a lot of twists in the story. And Cliffy`s are always good, makes people (me) want more. I'll keep an eye out for your fic Chiara writter of Stealing your heart and your kingdom
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Reviewed By: Little Tenshi On: November 14, 2003 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUST LOVEEEEEE YOU'RE STORY, you're the only one who didn't forget about the nameks, in every story their gone. PLEASE FINSIH IT SOON ^^ Have fun writing it by the way ^^
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Title: Ooh I like!
Reviewed By: Crazy Chi Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 10:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! It captures what I fail at in fanfics: the charm of the No ouji! ^___^ ~ cheech
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Reviewed By: efreet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rather like this angle. I think you have a good handle on Vegeta's thought processes. I do hope you update soon. I have a feeling I'm going to enjoy your work.
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Title: Jubei_chan (Vbabe)
Reviewed By: Jubei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Story! I enjoyed much! Please write more! |
Title: Review
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great fic! I like it and can't wait to see what you put out next chapter! Hey could you email me when you post? Its b_chan2007@yahoo.com ! Thanx and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Lauren On: August 02, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am the only one that actually knows the person that wrote this fan fic!!!! Hey Amanda....now to get serious I like your fan fic alot alothough I am more into the Trunks and Pan get togethers....I will read the ocasionall B/V one though!! I love your writing but you need to get some lemon action in hurr!!! lol I love you!! |
Reviewed By: AmandaJUne On: July 31, 2003 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the begin of the story. Please come out with the next chapter soon.
p.s if you could e-mail when you great next chapet out or just to chat about dragonballz e-mail at amandajune45@aol.com |
Reviewed By: tamela On: July 30, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a little short for just one chapter
you should really keep the rating down until you get some actual lemons on the fic itself
your grammer and wording were just a little off
i am the first reviewer
yay! |
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