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Reviewed By: mageofthebooksOlivia On: May 26, 2004 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This looks like fun! Please write more I'm really enjoying it! Your comedic talent shines.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a very good job with this. It's not easy to write a B/V get-together... at least not a good one, but you are well on your way.
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Title: Chap 5
Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and how it is going! Keep up the great work I love watching how you turn this story out! Keep up the great work, you know I love your work! b-chan2007
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Title: I have one annoying request !:-)
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 28, 2004 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE! Glad you updated. I was waiting on your chapters. Good look with AP stuff and don't neglect your readers for too long! Interesting how you put Master Roshi into this famous scene (I love the old perv!) debbiechan
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: Typicalteen (sorry not logged in atm) On: March 29, 2004 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic and I'm sorry that I wasn't signed in while writing you a review, but for a start it's very excellent. Continue on please, I look forward to reading your upcoming chapters ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Fire Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 19:20 CST
Comment/Review:
like the story a lot, but its too short. u have to update soon. im real curious about whats going to happen next.
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This is fun! I finally can read get-togethers again! This is a very good job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Even thought we all know how it end, *winks* the journey is always fun!
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Title: like it!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: February 17, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
:-) I'm addicted to B/V fics and especially like the traditional ones that stay in character and don't tease themselves too far outside the Toriyama world. I live for details like the chip Frieza implanted in Vegeta's brain! And your other little fill in the hole explanations that you've worked so easily into the story. Nice, efficient writing style (I should know--I'm a published author who happens to be a secret DBZ freak!); it's especially fluid for someone who's only in high school! You've got an ear for narrative--KEEP WRITING! BEST OF LUCK (and looking fwd to furture chapters) Debbiechan
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter! LOL, as you go on with your story it seems to keep getting better and better! I look forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the good work, you know I love your work! b-chan2007
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Reviewed By: Lizzy318 On: December 29, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is an very very good story so far. Please update soon I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: b-chan2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter, I'm sorry it took me awhile to beta-read it for you! Keep up the good work and get the next chapter out soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 02:02 CST
Comment/Review:
oh... side bar comment... from the peanut gallery... videl lover is a LOSER... who needs to learn to be nice and that her comments piss ppl like me off bc I think it makes her sound like she's in second grade. Common ppl if you aren't going to criticize constructively... stfu and if you don't know what that means its a very mean way to say keep your big trap closed
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 02:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked it... I want to read more... so update... you want a review well here you go... it's already funny just make it come faster... ok... so really... I'm not forcing you to write faster I just had to do that after you saying that reviews make you write faster... so good stuff good luck and have a merry christmas.
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Reviewed By: Videl Lover On: December 19, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic sucks! Vegeta is such a loser! He doesn't love Bulma! And what was she saying, bout him being gorgeous? HE'S UGLY! You better quit writing this shit before I puke!
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Reviewed By: Meagan O'Leary On: December 19, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, forgot to say keep writing. I couldn't believe you started this fanfic resently! Keep going please:)
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