| "Violation" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, has a lot of potential, but you need to update
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Reviewed By: Lady Lina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic! I look forward to reading what happens next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 30, 2003 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
skyda you empress me with ur work... it's wonderful. please write more. yeah!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 30, 2003 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
skyda you empress me with ur work... it's wonderful. please write more. yeah!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 13, 2003 04:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please update if you still remember this fic.... it's a great story and i want to know what will happened next!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 13, 2003 04:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please update if you still remember this fic.... it's a great story and i want to know what will happened next!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Laelia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
You did say that they will be OOC but even that way it's hard for me to picture Vegeta as the "look I found a treasure, let's split it guys!" Maybe you could make Bulma kill everybody except Vegeta and make him fall hard for her and ... make Bulma fall inlove with another. Oh you could keep it darker than ebony, which is extremely cool |
Reviewed By: Miko On: August 07, 2003 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just loved that you update right away! I'm glad Bulma is remaining strong. I look forward to seeing what she will do next! |
Reviewed By: lady Saphire On: August 06, 2003 05:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the story. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that last chapter made me squirm...more so than the first where everyone rapes her...probably because, we have no idea what kind of hell they will put her through to get their rocks off.....Overall the fic is really good, but I would like to see Bulma become tougher, more street smart because of her experiences and find a way to make each one of them pay....even Vegeta....that I would really like to read... |
Reviewed By: psycho On: August 05, 2003 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story, sometime make it to where she hurts at least one of those little bastards. well keep it coming! |
Reviewed By: Miko On: August 04, 2003 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma getting raped by all of them. I hope she stays strong. I'm glad you decided to continue the story. I was so surprised to see that you worte 2 more chapters. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: psycho On: August 07, 2003 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey love please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay! :) |
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 02, 2003 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That it or is there more? If so then please update. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Miko On: July 31, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story! |
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