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| "Spring fertility festival" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: (AIM) BooBooKitty27892 On: September 14, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfiction, I love it when people KNOW what they are writing about and put actual thing that would happen and stuff
in there. I will be sure to read your other fictions and am glad you wrote it like this. It's like Tom Sawyer (I hope that's how you spell it.) Where they say nigger in that book a lot and some people won't read it for a class because they say the author (I forget his name right now) was racist. The author wasn't racist he just wrote the book like it would have happened and in the context it would have been in for the time period. As you say he just didn't "Sugar Coat" it. Some schools have banned this book because it is "racist". Well I like people who don't sugar coat things because people should know the truth and I admire you for telling it like it is or was. I was just so enthralled by your story that I had to review it and I guess that says a lot since this is the first story I have reviewed on here and I have been reading stories on here for months but none were ever worth the time to review, but this story was just so great. You have it in you to be a real fiction writer! | Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is by far the most intellectually written story I've read,period.When I say this I mean you didn't make up your own stories and actually took the time the find out the truth of old Japan 'rituals' as well as there beliefs.I notice you hold your standard's very high and apologize for not being descriptive or elaborate enough,when the truth is this is a fan fic and most don't go even as far as you do when it comes to giving the real story.As for the OOC,people don't seem to realize that the character can't really be written the same as the person who created them.You can write them and stick along their personalities but you can't trully duplicate them.This a great story and the first I read that teaches you something.And I wouldn't mind writing the 'Inuyasha strip tease' but I wonder if I counld write one that dosen't come out...perverted. | Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 15:20 CDT
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Interesting. Not Sango's reaction...no, not even Higurashi-sama's reaction to Kagome-chan. I read other reviews, and honestly, I disagree with them, and I am not opposed to how you have handled the situation thus far. Miroku-sama against abortion? Yes, I'm sure he is, in more ways than just his devotion to his beliefs (the whole heir thing tends to come to mind, after all), but this is Sango-chan's decision that we are talking about here. If we look at it accordingly: 1.) Sango-chan, though she's female, seems to play the more dominant role in the "relationship." Everyone has seen that, time and again. Why would Miroku-sama go against her wishes? He wants her love and her happiness. That aside, 2.) if people knew anything about the history of Buddhist monks in Japan, well, they aren't your typical "devoted monk." Nobunaga-sama abhored and was disgusted with the monks, as they acted much like Miroku-sama does. He even noted their lack of honor and their lack of devotion to their vows. Considering how Miroku-sama acts toward women, why would he press his beliefs upon a woman, especially Sango-chan, now?
Also, why would Kagome-chan keep the child to keep Inuyasha from entering hell? Keeping the child out of her love--that I can see. However, keeping the child out of a desire to force Inuyasha to stay with her or even to stay out of hell is just not feasible as it is not like Kagome-chan at all. That would make her OOC, and OOC-Kagome-chan is flaky and unbearable (although, I am sure that it's just me that finds her unbearable when she is OOC).
Very interesting read. What will come out of Inuyasha's "visit" to Goshinboku? Ha, nothing good, I'm certain. Till then, I am ever your humble reader! | Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 10, 2003 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will happen at the God Tree? What will Kagome and Inuyasha's 'talk' result in? Please update as soon as possible. | Title: Oh no the Go Shin boku
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 00:12 CDT
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what did that idiot do to the gods tree...Inuyasha's going to hell...lol | Reviewed By: Crystal Singer On: September 08, 2003 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a Buddist Monk...wouldn't Miroku be violently opposed to abortion? To the extent of forcibly preventing his most desired heir from being eradicated? Kagome would also want to keep her child, as a way to keep Inu Yasha from following Kikyo to hell, it would be 3/4 human and could stay with her mother in future, big problem would be being a teen age pregnancy in high school. Also, don't they have morning after pills in Japan? That would be much safer than abortion and Sango could conceal that better> | Reviewed By: saki smurf On: September 08, 2003 08:13 CDT
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hmmm nice story I've been reading if for while. Much of it reminds me of the Betliane Rites that are used in Druid culture.
the fact that Kaede is married is interesting and I was sort of wondering about that. How ever wouldn't have been hard to take Kiyo's soul right after she died?
Also it was very in character for Sango not to let Miruko finish his sentence when they were talking about marriage, but have you heard of the rumor about 39 or 36 is of the manga where Miruko asks Sango to raise his childern?
Also why weren't there any demons that have appeared, wouln't have been attracted to what was going on last night or were they all killed? | Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. please hurry with the next chapter | Reviewed By: N aishin no Miko On: September 07, 2003 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why the 7 and 8: It needs to flow a tad more smoothly, but otherwise, it's fine. I think I noticed a couple of minor grammar errors as well. Nothing big.
Why the 9: While these festival stories are more original than these damn "they're in high school!!1" stories, I've seen a couple of festival stories now involving "risque" Shinto material. That's also why I gave this 10 on the enjoyment factor. This IS enjoyable thus far, and I do like the fact that you have researched Shinto ceremonies--plus, you added the names of the creation god and goddess from Shinto legend! Wow, almost no one does that! So I am very impressed. A good read, this is. | Reviewed By: Thiemo Günther On: September 05, 2003 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you've done a good job at dealing with serious and sensitive subject mattter. You've warned from the very beginning, that this story would be serious, so I would hope that other readers would understand the "tough love" you give your characters. ^_^ Your certainly applying a level of
detail to the characters and situations not to be found in the original manga, or anime. Much of the nitty gritty (and nasty truths) of live in the
Sengoku Jidai is ignored in Inuyasha. Makes your story all the more interesting, for readers like me, at least. | Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 05, 2003 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Does Kagome believe that she is pregnant as well? If so, wouldn't Inuyasha be able to tell by her scent? Please update as soon as possible. | Reviewed By: MoROn4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck goes in your head? Great story! enjoyable with a bit of history I love your fic write more soon! | Reviewed By: neoqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 22:26 CDT
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sorry, forgot to say Ja Ne.
R/N (Reviewer's Note), Neoqueen AKA No Tama in some places ( got the picture of ff.net on my beautiful head), sorry for my grammar, but you see, I don't speak English as I would like, I would rather left you my reviews, on Spanish, but I truly belive, that if I do that, then It would be a complete mess up here. | Title: Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!
Reviewed By: neoqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!! For updating this way, truly, I think I would die, if you hapen to not update sooner, I have told you once, in the first chapter, that you were evil in human form, but, I have change my mind now, and once again, Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!!Thank you!!! (now multiplie all those Thank you!!! by 1000000000000000, and that's my way to say, keep the good work man. | Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As great as ever ^^
I love History , and you're doing a really good job, as always.
I think your fics are really special, you know ?
You just take your time and let history set itself inside... that's great !
Keep going on with the great job !
Kirisame. | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] |
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