| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Title: yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 21:28 CST
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i think you should start some kind of romance between happen. dont make that story toooo long , readers lose interest after a while . i really liek this fic thought good job ! i was reading this at my work , im sooooooo gonna get fired if i get caught , see what you got me into!! lol. cant wait for the next chapter !!! keep up the good work !!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 23:54 CST
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's girl, Kagome On: November 30, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy Turkey Day!! Wow! You're a really good fanfic writer, seriously! Unlike most, I only found like 4 or 5 mistakes in spelling/grammar (not that im perfect =P) since the begining. I think you should definately make it longer, I wanna see them go on to more adventures 'cause it kinda reminds me of the real show. Also i think it would be so cool if by some chance Kagome has to give Inuyasha the prayer beads around his neck and the whole "Osuwari" (sit boy) thing comes in this story. Now that would be funny! Well anywho, keep up the good work and i'll keep on reading!!! Sayonara, Love your Japanese friend Satsuki!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 30, 2003 18:50 CST
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U EXEDED 25 REVIEWS?!?!?!?!?!? U HAVE FUCKING 222!!!! jesus... anywho great work i LOOOOVE it!! was that a mood swing? lol
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Reviewed By: KatrinaXaten On: November 29, 2003 16:28 CST
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DAMN YOU! DAMN KIT! DAMN THEM NOT KISSING!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 14:32 CST
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Tired of reading this story? NEVER! Make it as long as you want it! If you have a quick ending planned when they get to the castle, make a few obstacles in the journey. If you don't have any plans, make a twist when they get the castle. Or you could just make the story end when they get to the castle, and have Inu accept his position and write a sequel about thier kids or a new evil trying to take over his kingdom. ^-^ I know I know I make no sense, at least I tried! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait 4 the next up-date
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!! Its so sweat!!! I hope Kagome and Inuyasha confess to each other soon!!! Hope to read more!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like for them to get to the castle. They have picked up Shippou so that should be the last of the gang, right? This way we can find out what his decision is and meet some new people or what ever.
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 15:31 CST
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I like very much this story...and I think that if you put some obstacles in the middle, they will help Inuyasha to make a right choice...you know...we grow up with expirience...So...bring it all. Okey...you don´t want to make them declair their feelings for each other so soon...I understand...but they at least could admited it to themselves :-))) So..update soon
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Reviewed By: Black Death Angel On: November 26, 2003 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you telling me that you would not make them kiss until they kiss on the show??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 26, 2003 04:58 CST
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i personally enjoy the obstacles.. allthough the character development is good and steady, don't rush it too much or take too much time, i can't wait until they get to the castle but the new characters are a very interesting idea... Take your time, perfection takes time and thought, not speed and haste, hope you won't quit though because if you do.... you get the idea.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 02:17 CST
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 20:05 CST
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course i wont b bored. the only thing i want is FLUFF but only put it in wen u feel necessary. im outta ideas i just posted a chapter of the love of art n my jar of creativeness is empty
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Reviewed By: kitsunefirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make it last longer and make a lemon already.
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