| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Title: Brat, you so did not just leave that at that cliffhanger.
Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoyment factor is way down due to that little stunt with the last chapter. I do not appreciate reading cliifhangers that are that bad. Some of your spelling and grammar could use some work, but overall, the fic is really great so far. Normally, I would say that I patiently await the next chapter, but in this case, that would be lying. Update already. I wanna know what the hell you did to Inuyasha. Is it delayed reaction? I would assume it is, cause you can't kill the main character off before the end of the fic. Update NOW. This Crash commands it. Er, broken_angel. Whatever. (Too many pennames to remember) Now, be a good little authoress and update. Ja - broken_angel
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO INU-KUN! He's got to get better somehow, I mean the story wouldn't be the same, but still, INU-KUN! This was SUCH a good chapter! I liked the fighting scenes a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^-^
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in U.U) On: November 21, 2003 17:13 CST
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*misteriously wakes up* hey couldn't kagome have healed inu with her powers? OMG U KILLED HIM!!! THAT IS INPROPER USE OF INU! *becomes the "Disclaimer" person thingiemabober* *ahem* That was inappropriate use of InuYasha and we're going to have to put you in jail. *throws u in jail* LATER DAYS! (not from the Weekanders(THEY SUCK))
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 21, 2003 17:09 CST
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AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >=0!!!!! INUYASHA'S DEAD!!! INUYASHA'S DEAD !!!!!!! OH MY GOD INUYASHA'S DEAD!!!!!!! *faints dead away*
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: November 21, 2003 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like what Kagome say "NO NO NO" Inu can't be dead? You are EVIL !!!! WOW WOW don't just stop there hurry & update this is killing me! For that U better revive or do whatever authors' do & get Inu up on his butt & the next chapter better be a BIG FLUFF one to compensate for this heartwrenching shocking chapter !!! Ha Ha Love your story !!! Please quickly update.
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 07:32 CST
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Ohhhhh...tell me that Inuyasha will make it. He still have to tell Kagome that he loves her...He almost do. And Kagome have to have guts to tell him her feelings. But most of all...they have to finish this travel... I love this story...so...please, update soon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 02:39 CST
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AHH! damn you and your cliff hangers with people dieing! the Masuto thing was deffinatelly a good unexpected twist. BUT VERY EVIL CLIFF! ga! how am i supposed to consentrate in school now!? up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 00:20 CST
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I hope you can't sleep at night because of that cliffhanger!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 23:02 CST
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I believe we just struck 15 :P could be wrong, but I think we hit 15, anyway, this is my fav fic!
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Reviewed By: Condannare On: November 20, 2003 21:54 CST
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That wasn't very fair :Þ Love it, keep going! (are we at 15 yet??)
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:23 CST
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I still LOVE it! But update! I NEED to see what happens, UPDATE please! (there's at least 1 review from me)
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:22 CST
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*Fires many arrows in a row* ARGHHHHHH!!! I was patient last time but NO!!! Not with that cliffhanger, not with that as the last sentence!!! Not after he didn't say he f*cking loved her!!!! I WILL SMITE YOU AND ALL YOUR KIN!!!!!! Please, as soon as possible, give us more! No Inuyasha dieing, no, no, no, I've gone into denial!!!!!! What you wrote was not true Kagome's going to wake up and he's going to be there!! *After a half an hour of incoherent ranting I come back to my senses* Stupid emotions *puts on cool Sesshomaru demenor and walks away* you better update soon!
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Title: Ithilelda
Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 18:58 CST
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E.V.I.L E.V.I.L E.V.I.L E.V.I.L. I HATE CLIFFIES!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! CLIFFIES ARE E.V.I.L!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 18:06 CST
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*shot the arrow that landed on her butt* HA! GOT YA! lol... jk... *frowns and begins to cry* i cant believe it... YOU KILLED INUYASHA!! *in the background* u bastard... *glares into background and yells* SHE AINT NO BASTARD!! STUPID ASS!!! *turns around and smiles* sry bout that, lol... another great fic, cant wait for the next chapter... hope to see more great work from u!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 17:59 CST
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*shoots a teh foot wide arrow and nails author* aha! well thats wat u get for making me so sad...inu wont die. i wont let him. u read my story? im so happy =) last chap will be posted soon so look out for it. great chap!!
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