| "The Agency" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2012 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Girl! This is one of the BEST storylines ever! I've probably read it a couple dozen times. It never gets old. And I love how you don't even have to know the backgrounds of the character from the series to be able to follow it (although it totally rocks if you do know the Inuyasha storyline from the show). I keep waiting for a part 2 to see how our favorite characters are doing. Keep up the great work and know that your story is well loved and well read. Many hugs;-)... |
Reviewed By: Mika Sono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 15:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good AU, I must say. Original story line, I hadn't seen this done until now. A few things that got me: Randomly, there would be spaces in people's names that didn't belong. Once it was "Shippo u" and then it would be "Inuya sha". Just very random spaces. That might have been you, might have been the website, not sure. Other than that, no spelling, grammar, or typing errors popped out at me. Another thing is your characterization of Kagome and Inuyasha. Inuyasha is portrayed here as a kind gentleman who has a playful side. Inuyasha is a very gruff character who doesn't trust people easily. Being in an orginization surrounded by death, he would be even more, not less, untrusting. Kagome is a very random character in this story. She's happy most of the time, with none of the lack of confidence in herself that is associated with her character. Most of that is rooted in her self doubt and insecurities about Kikyou, and since she never had to truly deal with Kikyou, it can be over looked. But the fact that you have her being afraid of Kouga when he puts some moves on her, but has her perfectly fine after almost getting raped is very out of character for anyone. The only thing she asks for is a shower... Inuyasha also hints at the fact that he's never let a woman see him naked or close to it before Kagome. AKA, he's still a virgin. Then he's all over Kagome like he knows exactly what he's doing. And Kagome's pretty adempt herself for not dealing with many males before Inuyasha. Overall, it's a good fic. But try to overthink some things, put yourself in your characters as you write. Then you won't get conflictions like those. I did like the fic, don't get me wrong. I'm not trying to dissuade you from writing or discourage you. You have a good style. You just have to work on your plot lines. -Mika-
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Title: i love this fanfic
Reviewed By: kaye_kay28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic. i always come bak to it juss to read it. :] it's a joy to read. super original to my knowing. it's got a good, fast moving plot. and it's easy to follow. super cute antics. it sticks to tha original character flow. very, very, very, very, VERY GOOD JOB!! :D
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Title: good
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 16:28 EDT
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i like this story, i do think it ended abruptly(i missed the pregnancy!-i love it cause it's funny and kinda dramatic when they get pregnant :D) but i luv it! now i need to read the sequel! YAY!
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Reviewed By: sedelia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best stories I've read. Good job. :-)
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Reviewed By: noooooooooo On: August 30, 2005 05:35 EDT
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!!! you said there would be part two!! it's been YEARS where is it?!! =(
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Reviewed By: lynn_luvya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It was so fun to read but personly I think that should wright a part 2 well thats jest me.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:19 EDT
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lol, cute ending! i loved the whole.. matching beginning and ending thing.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 16:13 EDT
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wow, i really liked chapter three ^_^ something exactly like that happened to me not too long ago XD!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kaitlyn On: June 02, 2005 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amazing, i've read losts of stories but that one was one of the best. You wrrote it well and ended it without leaving any unanswered questions behind. I really enjoyed reading the story and I hope the rest of your stories are as good as this one. keep one writing kool-kcc
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Reviewed By: RottenCherry On: March 02, 2005 14:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Alright, this one is the best Fan Fiction I have ever read. No kidding. The story is interesting, the characters are placed in a interesting setting, and since I love AU... Well, nothing to add here. Anyways, I wished it was longer, but this lenght is perfectly fine. Not too much, not too little. The lemon was amazing, one of the better ones I've found in this collection of Fan Fictions. I hope you keep on with your writing, you've got the talent. See ya around...
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Reviewed By: Bad Religion On: November 13, 2004 01:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it but u shoulda made it longer but oh well... BAD RELIGION RULES!!!!
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Title: Excellent story
Reviewed By: Valerie*inu lover On: October 23, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! Your story is so good!!! I have to tell you I wasn't bored or reading fast at any time during my whole time reading it. Everything was a 10 except for the grammar and spelling though there were only around like 5 or 6 errors. As you can see I'm a very picky person and you should be flattered that I gave almost all 10!(I don't do that very often, not often at all) Anyways, just I thought that you should know of your awesome story and compliment you! It was truly an a great story.
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Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 03:22 EDT
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excellent story. very different and worth while. when will the sequal be out! thanks for your consciencious writing and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: wonderful! On: August 24, 2004 00:06 EDT
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i loved the story! it was fantastic!
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Reviewed By: love the story On: July 17, 2004 12:59 EDT
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i loved the story. Great idea, and great execution.you should definetly do a sequel to this story
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! This was one of your better fic ans i have no commplaints! ^_^ i can't wait for your sequel to come out!
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan (Not signed in) On: June 30, 2004 22:53 EDT
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Wow! I was suprised by how great this story turned out to be! I just picked a random story to read, I didn't think it would end up being one of my favorites! I'm definitely looking forward to a sequel and to reading more of your stories! good job!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 01:24 EDT
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That was a great story. Loved it!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(not logged on) On: April 24, 2004 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!
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Title: Kagura_Yasha_Offline
Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 09:22 EST
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Okay... Short on time here, so I'm only able to give a quick little review. I really like this one. It's got a MIB touch without being cheesy, and the believability of the characters is good. All in all, you've done a nice job here.
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Reviewed By: Lil Inu the second On: February 14, 2004 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome!Write sequal,if ya can!Ya guys need to write more Police Fanfics.Well bye!^_^
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 20:32 EST
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Ok... finished o.O Erm... your favorite color is green and you like the name Takara =D Just like in Code Pink. I love all your stories and I can't WAIT for the sequel... if I somehow missed it and it already came out... then feel free to call me clueless and stupid.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 17:36 EST
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This is so cool! I regret not reading it earlier. I hate Kikyo, stupid forward idiotic bitch of a whore. I'm jumping to conclusions again... o.O I just won't tell you them cause they seem silly.
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Title: WOOHOOO!!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 06:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing is that there were some spaces between the names. Is it MediaMiner doing that? I do not know. GREAT JOB!!!! WAI!! Keep on going!!!!!!!! ^^ Off to finish the others!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 00:02 EST
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i cant remmber if i reviewed for this story but i love it! u did a great job!
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Girl On: November 21, 2003 04:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love your story! i definately am looking forward to the sequel. i hope that you get it out soon, cause i really enjoyed the first one. your stories are some of my favorites on mediaminer. keep it up! :D
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good.... you should definetly do a sequel to this story.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: October 18, 2003 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny, good and lemony... what more can i ask or tell?
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Reviewed By: Risttaimm On: October 05, 2003 09:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This whole story just..... pardon the cheesy phrase- rocked my socks. Great idea, and great execution. Kudos to you!
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