| "The Agency" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 12:32 EDT
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Konnichiwa! I'm back! And to kick off this event I will try not to be long winded. This was a good chapter, but you worried me for a bit. (You know despite popular demand, one of these days Kagome is going to actually get raped in one of these fan fics.) And I liked the way you made InuYasha respone to Kagomes fuming at their house. Impling something just enough so she doesn't know if he is serious. The "icing on the cake" occured at the camp argument. I can honestly say that I have never read or heard anyone pharse the pick up line that way...."..look better on my floor.".....If he weren't so loveable I'd tell Kagome to slap him, Miroku style! Putting in that the ofuda for holy powers was original. And is the a demon thing? All the women have to be "bitches" or "wenches"? Makes me think about the last chapter where the other "men" were jealous that InuYasha gets home cooked meals. Wonder if Kagome lost cool points for that with the girls? Opps! I said I wouldn't be long winded didn't I? Well I did say try....
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 12:04 EDT
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Another great chapter ^^ I had a feeling that this 'case' wouldn't go so well, even if it did end okay. Her dream man, huh? I wonder what dog boy would think if he knew that? *laughs*
And since I tend to read reviews, the 1969 bit deals with a mm.org issue, where lots of reviews by a lot of people were 'stamped' as being done on December 31, 1969...like so:
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 19:00 EST
I said I *left* a lot of reviews on that date. It was a joke. |
Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: September 06, 2003 15:46 EDT
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me again. i am still confused about " 1969" year reviews. just wondering when r u gonna post another chapter?
LOLITA |
Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: September 04, 2003 17:30 EDT
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umm... just wondering if i gone crazy. in one of ur reviews by ladysesshomaru. it sayd that she/he got a lot of reviews in 1969. 1969??????/
P.S. it would be very emberassing if that woudl be u.
Lolita |
Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: September 04, 2003 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! love it, love it. oh by the way, i though that it would be cool if u would write about sesh/rin and mir/sango stories after u will be done with inuyasha/kag,you know all the stories of the big agency.this is just an idea, so don't start saying about stupid ass readers, u write for them and they still critisize. cuz i am not! i am just saying my idea. take it or leave it. Anyways, about sesh/ rin, u know he could give a really hard time to Rin, cuz he doesn't want to get married or fall in love. yara-yara-yara. anyways, write soon
Lolita |
Reviewed By: Miko_Kissi On: September 04, 2003 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I love reading it. Please continue. |
Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 12:14 EDT
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*snorts* I made a lot of reviews in December 1969. It's good to see that Kagome recovered...at least, I hope she's actually fully recovered. Miroku and Sesshoumaru giving their partners 'looks' when Inuyasha mentioned that Kagome cooks daily...very cute ^^ |
Reviewed By: Laydhwk On: September 02, 2003 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An overall enjoyable read. Flows smoothly with a fun and consistant attention to detail. I like knowing the emotions and thoughts, facial expression and such, and you seem to be very much in tune with the characters and there surrounding environment. I look forward to your next chapter. I did not rate the spelling because as you can see I do not spell well myself, and did not feel comfortable in judging. |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: August 31, 2003 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Dragon,
It's great to see that you have now posted this on here. Your talent is awsome, just like mine is.
As always Dragon, keep up the great work.
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On:
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I liked your explanation about how the children become agents and why they are paired off by the agency. Not only does it make a lot of sense but I can tell that you put real thought into it.
Poison, huh? I'd like to see how they get out of this one. Is Dr. Myoga going to pay them a visit? When is Kagome ever going to complete a job that doesn't land her on the couch afterwards? But I guess it would be more difficult if it was InuYasha that was hurt....
So does this mean that Miroku, Sango, Rin, and Sesshomaru will come visit them at "their house" now? ( hope Sesshy isn't mad at me for putting him last *looking around expectantly* )Oh, I know! I'll put Koga on the end of that.
That reminds me! Since when is Kagome Koga's woman? I don't remember him asking her anything, except for a "good time". (Pig!!) So that is what happened between Kikyo and InuYasha...no comment. (yes, for once I am speechless) Can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On:
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I liked your explanation about how the children become agents and why they are paired off by the agency. Not only does it make a lot of sense but I can tell that you put real thought into it.
Poison, huh? I'd like to see how they get out of this one. Is Dr. Myoga going to pay them a visit? When is Kagome ever going to complete a job that doesn't land her on the couch afterwards? But I guess it would be more difficult if it was InuYasha that was hurt....
So does this mean that Miroku, Sango, Rin, and Sesshomaru will come visit them at "their house" now? ( hope Sesshy isn't mad at me for putting him last *looking around expectantly* )Oh, I know! I'll put Koga on the end of that.
That reminds me! Since when is Kagome Koga's woman? I don't remember him asking her anything, except for a "good time". (Pig!!) So that is what happened between Kikyo and InuYasha...no comment. (yes, for once I am speechless) Can't wait for your next chapter!
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Title: ...you must kep GOING
Reviewed By: Ai no kami [MediaMiner Member] On:
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i can't wait for more...this one is probably one of the few alternate universe/police fics i've read...please write more...make us happy...no MAKE ME HAPPY! =3 -mreow |
Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On:
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well you sure do know when to stop a chapter! you like cliffies don't you? do turtles have poison though? |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On:
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Poor Kagome! *wonders what will happen* Again, I enjoyed the dialogue and interaction between Inuyasha and Kagome ^^ |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 02:16 EDT
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Your favorite color is green, right?
My, my! Just couldn't control himself. tsk, tsk I guess things won't be so comfy between them for a while. (hope Miroku doesn't find out about this)
I am loving this story! Be looking for the next chapter, so update soon. |
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