| "The Agency" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: rach On: September 21, 2003 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that you have great talent and you know how to put strong emotion in to your writing. please keep updating. i can't wait to see what happens. again plase update soon |
Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: September 20, 2003 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great another chapter. The part with Shippo misbehaving was good, cuz life is not perfect and i hope that u are trying to make this story as close to reality as possible. So yea, update soon,
Lolita
P.S. you might want to check ur story on misspelling. i think u meant to write were, but instead wrote where, stuff like that. |
Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: September 20, 2003 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great another chapter. The part with Shippo misbehaving was good, cuz life is not perfect and i hope that u are trying to make this story as close to reality as possible. So yea, update soon,
Lolita
P.S. you might want to check ur story on misspelling. i think u meant to write were, but instead wrote where, stuff like that. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 03:35 EDT
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Awww! This chapter was so sweet. It was so heart warming that I am honoring it with a short, sweet, and simple review. (I hope this comes up in purple) MM is messing with my MO!
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOO COOOLLLL....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ Write more |
Reviewed By: WHO STOLE MY NICKNAME? On: September 12, 2003 17:51 EDT
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great another chapter. loved the 3 1st once,
Lilita |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 22:29 EDT
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good chap, i like this story, and thank you very much for updating so often, this story is becoming very interesting |
Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 01:09 EDT
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This is a great story!!! I just love it, and that was a really good lemon scene! I really, really, really hope you update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 21:15 EDT
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this story is so good! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 19:33 EDT
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Why do I get the sinking feeling that that was Kirara. Oh well, guess she could not have done to much for this story anyways. And the classic sex scene with the shower was enough for me. I noticed that everyone seems to be really impressed with her fighting skills. Makes me wonder if that will play a bigger part in this story. I guess Kagome and InuYasha's sparing game will have different rewards at the end, ne? Thanks for updating so quick. (And it was long, too!) *cheering in the background*
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 19:30 EDT
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Okay, you know from my previous reviews that I am definately a fan of this fic...but...the lemon just wasn't as great as the rest of the fic...I don't even necessarily mean the way it went, I mean the structure of your sentences and your description. It's as if someone else wrote the lemon. It lacked the wonderful description that you used in the rest of the story, even the rest of chapter six. Actually, I think you may have been focusing on the wrong things to describe during the lemon. It wasn't as smooth in flow as the rest of the fic. The rest of the chapter, I loved. Great job ^^ *chants for more* I love this fic. I hope you're not upset by my review...for me, a honest crit is the best review I can get, because it shows me what I need to work on ^^ And, I know it's hard to get decent, *real* reviews around the fanfiction sites, because a lot of readers do not know a good fic when they see it, and they haven't a clue what to say to aide the writer ^^ |
Reviewed By: RavenShadow On: September 08, 2003 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story! I could not stop reading, it is very additive. I really hope you update soon because this is turning into a really great fic!!! |
Reviewed By: honey sweet mouth On: September 07, 2003 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really great i love your explantoin about the angency made alot of sence. The way you described inuyasha and the house was wonderful i got a vived image of the room like i was looking through Kagomes eyes. |
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