| "The Claim" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
this just keeps getting better...though it is strange to see Wufei act like this...but it is a different universe....
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 18, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
May I ask, was Heero listening that? The chapter was excellent.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 17, 2003 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to make your chapters longer... Ok Heero should catch Wufei thare at the hut and beat the shit out of him and then Wufei should lose his family..His mate needs to find out about Duo's baby because Wufei is a prick ... Heero and Duo need to fall in love and have a baby ... Well I guess thats all ..This a great story and I can't wait to here more TTFN
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Go Duo! I love how he stands up to Wufei like that.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm just loving Shinigami's POV. Wufei came to visit Duo!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 11, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! What will happen next with Wufei and Dou? You have to update soon. Keep up the good job.
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Title: Don't have one
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 11, 2003 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What in gods name dose Wufei want ?Heero should beat the hell out of him.. Wufei should leave Duo alone.. I love this story and i'm really geting in to it please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 11, 2003 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh,uh, trubles ahead. That's really interesting and captivating.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 07, 2003 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really something, Heero saw Wufei and Dou. That is just so amazing, hey how does Heero know that Dou doesn't lie? Write more soon and keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So has Heero had a thing for Duo for a long time?
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: September 30, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's excellent, you have all to make this fic good.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 30, 2003 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really short, considering that there was alot going on and now Heero finally shows Dou he cares. Anyways hope school doesn't keep you too busy so you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric_Draconis On: September 30, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Have fun at school, heh.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heero's revelation.
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Reviewed By: madamebutterfly1983 On: September 28, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fanfic. I have never seen one done like this. Keep Writing!
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