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Reviewed By: (Weissangel24) On: July 20, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, I just spent two hours reading this from start to finish. I cried when Duo lost his baby, but I'm glad that you chose to go that route. It's not one that I've seen before. I'm kinda peeved that you ended the story like that. It just seemed abrupt. I strongly suggest doing a sequel. I would really like to see where you'd go with their life on the run, and the new life they could build. Plus, you never even mentioned Quatre once! I'm a huge fan of 3x4 ^-~ I hope to read more. Thank you for a great fic. Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 12:52 CDT
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Hey I'm a relatively new member. I just read your fic and loved every chap. Duo makes a wonderful child bearer--mother type man guy. ^_^; Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: youngersister On: November 04, 2004 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cuerlity Cuerlity I say WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! Why did you have to end it??? Save me!!!!!! This was my favorite fic and now ITSSSSSSSSSS over!!!WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! *stops crying and becomes cheerful* Oh well a least theres a sequell, There IS a sequell right!? RIGHT!? tell me cursed computer!!!!!!!!!! Tell me!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mikito On: July 26, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T Are you really done? Email me when your first book comes out! Or if you make an other!You are a great writter!!!! Please write more!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sudan girl On: February 01, 2004 06:54 CST
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The fic by itself is not bad but then Duo is horribly ooc. I guess I've seen the movie that given you the idea of this fic and some who I can't understand HOW you've decided to turn it into a GW fic!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:15 CST
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I forget why I finally broke down and read this fic. I mean, you had the warning right there on your summary: "MPREG". That's just not something I've had any desire to read. Well, that was up until now. Again, for some reason, I read the Prologue. Actually, only the first few paragraphs of it. That's all it took. You have a fantastic imagination, kiddo! I took a look at your profile and was floored at all of the fics you've written! (Jeez, it's going to take me forever to get through them all...) But I digress. I loved the setting and the plot, and the detail you put into your descriptions - it's like watching it on TV. You did a wonderful job of bringing Heero and Duo's relationship along slowly, and who wouldn't love your Shinigami? Add me to the list of those that want a sequel; you left too many things unresolved. :)
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Reviewed By: Destinys lot On: November 30, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, wonderful I hope you write a sequel. ja ne
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 23, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the ending and I really hope you write more... Your stories are really great and I will read more of them so until then TTFN
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! VERY GOOD
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Reviewed By: hi there! On: November 23, 2003 16:42 CST
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I love your story! I've been reading it since you started. I hope you will write your sequle to this story. Will Quatre be in the next one? Lots of luck! I'll keep an eye out for your other stories!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 23, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All the fic was very interesting and I enjoyed itm congratulations. Will be more? I hope.
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Reviewed By: ~Shu-chan~ On: November 23, 2003 14:30 CST
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Oh wow! A evil cliffhanger! I hope there is a sequel, it'd be evil to leave it at here! Another well written chapter, I am at end!! Congrats!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wufei endied up not being such an asshole.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 23, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WHAT? That's it! An unknown future. Couldn't you have given this fic a cliché ending? I guess you could say that I want the sequel and you better make it full of fluff. There were some typos here and there. Other than that I love this chapter. I absolutely LOVE this fic. Keep up the GREAT job and post the sequel soon.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 12:41 CST
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OMG!!!!!!!! That was awesome!! Aww!! I liked Wufei in the end. That's so horrible-- what happened I mean. **Huggles Duo & Heero** I hope they make it, and have a beautiful life together. . . . Wait a minute . . . **SCREAMS** AGONY!! AGONY!! Why?? Da Horror!!! U MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!! PEEZ!! PEEZ!! PEEZ!! Go. Now. Run. Quick. Hurry. Write! LOL. GREAT JOB KATIKAT!! ~Da Rurouni Lilouani~ . . . What are you still doing reading this??? GO WRITE THE SEQUEL CONFLAMMIT!!! ^_______^
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