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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 11:39 PST
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COOLIE!! THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Poor Sessh-chan. I wish Kagome and him could officially get together soon!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 22:13 PST
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Oh!! Forgot ... FFN is having fits about lemons and taking down stories... best to post it here and let the others know to come here or to whatever site you can post it without it being "censored" >_
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 22:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Too cute!! No sooner do they land then Inuyasha's at Sesshomaru! You'd think the silly mutt would at least make sure that Kagome got out of the well safely before starting in. Ah well ... like I said, men with attitude! Course, give Inuyasha time to think about that inu-plushie and he might just start to wake up. Maybe. It's possible (if Miroku spells it out for him hahaha). You know, for someone with "writers block" you still come out with a pretty decent chapter ^_^ Although I do agree it could be longer, but that's my selfishness ^_~ I hope you and your home manages to get bypassed by those fires. Come back when you can ... most of us will be waiting to see what you have in store for them all next!
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Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really been enjoying this so far. You've been doing a fabulous job. That wasn't such a dull chapter. I especially like the scene when Rin and shippou got their candy and other presents. Rin is just so adorable! I also like how Kagome just took charge of the two brothers during the fight. It's nice to see her show some backbone. As for the lemon: YEAH!!! DO IT!!! I love lemony goodness. Of course, it better be a lemon between kagome and sesshoumaru! BTW, I gave up reading stuff on FF.net for the most part due to the no lemon policy. I say just forget about them and stick to mediaminer, but that's just my opinion. well...Hope you post soon! Get over that writer's block. Keep thinking nice juicy lemon! PS....Hope the fire stays away from your house.
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Reviewed By: Kyana On: October 28, 2003 20:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful. I wouldn't think someone as young as you could write so well. I haven't ever read a k/s pairing that I liked until now. You are doing a great job of putting them together without getting too far off from the original character.
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU EVIL PERSON!! you don't stop something that good!!!!!! damn cliffys...
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Reviewed By: Kilea859 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 18:25 PST
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awwww...come on i wanna know too! ^^ very good story so far. i look forward to you updates! ~.^
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tee hee! I decided to review on mediaminer, since ff is STILL being a butt about my reviews. I just love the new chapter darlin'! Totally hot! I still feel so bad fo Sesshou though, but that feeling is slowly evaporating. See, I got suckered by one of the muses to write chapter thirty-six of 'To Bear Witness' right? And in this chapter, he gets his and he gets it good! can't believe I'm enjoying the hell I'm putting him through...but I am! : ) You'll see what I mean. Oh, and back on subject, you're like my #1 author now! You do at least try to update, thought if I lived where you do I'd say forget it until everything calms down. I know I'd understand. Uh-oh. The Little Muse and Moms are fighting again. I'd better go break them up. Ja ne! SF
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 14:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnnnnooooooooo more...... its not fair why does kagome always have to get sesshomaru....wwwwaaaaaahhhhhhh...please update soon, ill die if you dont.
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Title: ooommmggg
Reviewed By: White Angel Chi {media miner member} On: October 27, 2003 20:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that chappie was awsom.(sobs) even w out lemon. gods ur good
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Reviewed By: tgyf On: October 24, 2003 11:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going this is great and I love the story line it is sooo goood keep doing what you do best
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry where OCCness is concerned. It's tough to show Sesshoumaru's true feelings since he's cold and distant most of the time. What's Inuyasha going to do? Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, much to my family's consternation, I found this one this morning and read it all the way through. men with attitude. Are there any other kind? They make life so interesting and difficult at the same time ^_~ Between Inuyasha, Kouga and now Sesshoumaru (not to mention the bout with Houjo) poor Kagome has a lot to think over and figure out! In other words, loved the story and will definitely be back for the updates!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 06:25 PDT
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Poor Sesshoumaru, realizing his love and accepting defeat before even trying. He's such a...a...man. I knew he was going to hear Kagome's apology to Inu while she was bathing...bad timing. Now, to find out what happens now that they have returned.
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Title: The long awaited chapter
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 20, 2003 23:55 PDT
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Heh Heh no problem! . . . Just think it would be nice for both of them .. . :: still drool over Sesshoumaru, Damn Kagome .. she's so lucky!!! :: . . . . Anyhow I'm sure that this fic will be much harder to write now that Sesshoumaru had finally realize his feeling for Kagome... . . . but the main question is . . . . . . . . . . . . . What the heck will Inuyasha do when Kikyou come into the picture again? :: evil snicker ::
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