| "My Suru Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: nameless On: September 04, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, and I love Vegata's personality it's so cute. I was halfway expecting him to start licking goku's face after he knocked him over like dino or something. Of course that could be seen as really cute or really kinky ^_- So, ideas, well I've never been very good at ideas (probably why I'm not a writer) but I'll try. Hmm, well I don't think you should have freiza try and take him away because that would be to cliche and I want Veggie to stay, but if you did decide to it would be okay cause it would go along with the dragonball story real well (probably why it's such a cliche in fanfics). What I think would be cool is for Goku and Veggie to get it on, then Veggie will get pregnant then Goku will be sad cause he'lll think that radditz is the father, but in the end everyone will be happy cause goku's the father. Okay that was a lame idea, but I tried. Or you could have raditz become obsessed with vegeta after there little 'time' together and when vegeta gets pregnant he thinks he's the father and tries to claim vegeta as his own, but it's alright in the end cause goku's veggie's babydaddy. Well there you go pretty much the same idea twice *shrugs* I tried. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 13:09 CDT
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Hey, cool, I gave you an idea. This should make things much more interesting. Happy to help dude!
Vegeta spoke? Was that through a mind link? NO! DON'T SEND VEGETA AWAY! He loves you, you love him, REALISE THAT!
Please continue, I'm really liking this. |
Reviewed By: XotakuX On: September 04, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story,hope to see more up soon! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 13:05 CDT
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Wow, I love this story. i like how Vegeta is like aloveable pet dog or something. That's really sweet. Wonder wher I can pick up one of those?
Oh, whats wrong with Vegeta? Will he become pregnant with Radditz's child? How is he going to handle all this? How can he trust Goku after he made him go through all this?
Why am I asking so many questions? Please update, I LOVE THIS STORY! |
Reviewed By: rebel347 On: September 03, 2003 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this fic sounds promising! I cant wait to hear whats wrong with vegeta. write again soon |
Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 01, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great begining! It sounds like its going to be a great story! I cant wait to read more |
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