| "My Suru Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 10:11 CDT
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Sweedon huh? Wow, I never read any works by Sweedish people. If I have I didn't know about it. I love it!
That thing about making a little den thing for the cubs was so sweet. It even made me go "Awwwwww" and not a lot of fics do that. The next chapter sounds interesting, at least you planned yours. I usually just make up mine as I go along. UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: NN On: September 19, 2003 20:54 CDT
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NO Vegeta can't push his cub away! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 10:16 CDT
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Ahhh, happy ending. But the cub can't die! Not after what Vegeta did to protect it! PLEASE DON'T KILL THE LIL CUBS! Still, nice story and you update so frequently, love it! But that bastard Frieza got away! At least Dedoria is dead, hope so anyway! Still, update soon. (((btw, thatnks for that. I do what I can. My e-mail is vicky.wood@virgin.net) Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: ImpBountyHunter On: September 13, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love the way you have toke the Saiyan-jin animule behaver/carcteristicks and put them together. I hope that makes since. |
Reviewed By: NN On: September 13, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sup okay I have names how about Gavin and Vance both are older names and I think both are latin |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 11:10 CDT
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Oh, I meant to send in some names but I was just stuck myself. If you search in Google or something for Japanese names then you'll probably get a load of names. It worked for me once. Still, great story, I love it! And yeah, is this dying or something or am I the pnly one reviewing. C'mon, prove me wrong people. Please update soon. Are Vegeta's cubs gonna be ok. Is he gonna be ok? And Goku? What happened to Yamcha and Tien? They dead? UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 12:50 CDT
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First some prat deleates your chapters and now the virus? ARGH! What luck! Man, hope that you can get it sorted quick. Have you tried downloading one of those Anti-Virus Systems from the net? I know that some are free to download.
But still, back to the fic. I'm really liking it so far. I don't really care about the name spelling, I still know who you mean.
Hey, at least Goku is going after him. GO FOR IT!!!!!! Update as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: Nazuma Neiko On: September 11, 2003 19:24 CDT
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This isn't a flame but..... WHER IH THE THREE WORLDS DID YOUR EDITOR GO?!!!? You really need an editor. BAD! OH! By the way it's Krillin,and Tien
Gomen! I don't know now to spell Yumcha's name but I *do* no how to spell Krillin and Tien. Continue |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 00:53 CDT
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What a prick. But hey, I'd like to see him do any better in a fic. He probably couldn't write a decent fic if he tried. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:18 CDT
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NO!THAT CAN'T HAPPEN! REFUSE GOKU! REFUSE!
Still, you're doing good and, seriously, that lemon wasn't bad at all. But I can understand if you don't want to read through it for a while. I was the same. Anyway, keep this one going> What's Vegeta going to do when he finds himself being taken away from Goku? Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: xotakux On: September 07, 2003 04:29 CDT
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Poor little Veggie-chan,this is just unfair! Anyway I like the way the story is going,keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:54 CDT
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That lemon wasn't as bad as you thought. Trust me, my first one was much much worse then that. Hey, maybe you think its bad but it really isn't. If you really want to, practice makes perfect. Hey, the ideas were no problem. Happy to help. If Goku's starting to hear Vegeta are they bonded? Ahh, cute. Can't wait for next chapter. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 12:44 CDT
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I reckon that you could mix in an idea from both NN and nameless in there.
I'm agreeing with NN in the fact that Frieza should get an interest in Vegeta, its bound to make things much more intersesting. But Goku probably won't give him over that easily so maybe he sends someone to kidnap Vegeta during the night or something.
nameless also has a good idea with Radditz getting an obsession with Vegeta and wants more from him.
If Vegeta is pregnant then I really don't know about the father? Flip a coin?
Well, those aren't really my ideas, I've just agreed with other reviewers. But..wait..the kidnapping thing was my idea.
Ok, well thats the best I can do for now. Hope it helps. |
Reviewed By: fulu On: September 04, 2003 15:20 CDT
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don't put down your site and continue the story(the Dragon Ball Z and Digimon doujinshi aren't working) |
Reviewed By: NN On: September 04, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEs Freeza should have an intrest and Vegeta should get pregnant with goku's children |
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