| "My Suru Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 12:50 CDT
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First some prat deleates your chapters and now the virus? ARGH! What luck! Man, hope that you can get it sorted quick. Have you tried downloading one of those Anti-Virus Systems from the net? I know that some are free to download.
But still, back to the fic. I'm really liking it so far. I don't really care about the name spelling, I still know who you mean.
Hey, at least Goku is going after him. GO FOR IT!!!!!! Update as soon as you can! |
Reviewed By: Nazuma Neiko On: September 11, 2003 19:24 CDT
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This isn't a flame but..... WHER IH THE THREE WORLDS DID YOUR EDITOR GO?!!!? You really need an editor. BAD! OH! By the way it's Krillin,and Tien
Gomen! I don't know now to spell Yumcha's name but I *do* no how to spell Krillin and Tien. Continue |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 00:53 CDT
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What a prick. But hey, I'd like to see him do any better in a fic. He probably couldn't write a decent fic if he tried. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:18 CDT
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NO!THAT CAN'T HAPPEN! REFUSE GOKU! REFUSE!
Still, you're doing good and, seriously, that lemon wasn't bad at all. But I can understand if you don't want to read through it for a while. I was the same. Anyway, keep this one going> What's Vegeta going to do when he finds himself being taken away from Goku? Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: xotakux On: September 07, 2003 04:29 CDT
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Poor little Veggie-chan,this is just unfair! Anyway I like the way the story is going,keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:54 CDT
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That lemon wasn't as bad as you thought. Trust me, my first one was much much worse then that. Hey, maybe you think its bad but it really isn't. If you really want to, practice makes perfect. Hey, the ideas were no problem. Happy to help. If Goku's starting to hear Vegeta are they bonded? Ahh, cute. Can't wait for next chapter. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 12:44 CDT
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I reckon that you could mix in an idea from both NN and nameless in there.
I'm agreeing with NN in the fact that Frieza should get an interest in Vegeta, its bound to make things much more intersesting. But Goku probably won't give him over that easily so maybe he sends someone to kidnap Vegeta during the night or something.
nameless also has a good idea with Radditz getting an obsession with Vegeta and wants more from him.
If Vegeta is pregnant then I really don't know about the father? Flip a coin?
Well, those aren't really my ideas, I've just agreed with other reviewers. But..wait..the kidnapping thing was my idea.
Ok, well thats the best I can do for now. Hope it helps. |
Reviewed By: fulu On: September 04, 2003 15:20 CDT
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don't put down your site and continue the story(the Dragon Ball Z and Digimon doujinshi aren't working) |
Reviewed By: NN On: September 04, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEs Freeza should have an intrest and Vegeta should get pregnant with goku's children |
Reviewed By: nameless On: September 04, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, and I love Vegata's personality it's so cute. I was halfway expecting him to start licking goku's face after he knocked him over like dino or something. Of course that could be seen as really cute or really kinky ^_- So, ideas, well I've never been very good at ideas (probably why I'm not a writer) but I'll try. Hmm, well I don't think you should have freiza try and take him away because that would be to cliche and I want Veggie to stay, but if you did decide to it would be okay cause it would go along with the dragonball story real well (probably why it's such a cliche in fanfics). What I think would be cool is for Goku and Veggie to get it on, then Veggie will get pregnant then Goku will be sad cause he'lll think that radditz is the father, but in the end everyone will be happy cause goku's the father. Okay that was a lame idea, but I tried. Or you could have raditz become obsessed with vegeta after there little 'time' together and when vegeta gets pregnant he thinks he's the father and tries to claim vegeta as his own, but it's alright in the end cause goku's veggie's babydaddy. Well there you go pretty much the same idea twice *shrugs* I tried. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 13:09 CDT
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Hey, cool, I gave you an idea. This should make things much more interesting. Happy to help dude!
Vegeta spoke? Was that through a mind link? NO! DON'T SEND VEGETA AWAY! He loves you, you love him, REALISE THAT!
Please continue, I'm really liking this. |
Reviewed By: XotakuX On: September 04, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story,hope to see more up soon! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 13:05 CDT
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Wow, I love this story. i like how Vegeta is like aloveable pet dog or something. That's really sweet. Wonder wher I can pick up one of those?
Oh, whats wrong with Vegeta? Will he become pregnant with Radditz's child? How is he going to handle all this? How can he trust Goku after he made him go through all this?
Why am I asking so many questions? Please update, I LOVE THIS STORY! |
Reviewed By: rebel347 On: September 03, 2003 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this fic sounds promising! I cant wait to hear whats wrong with vegeta. write again soon |
Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 01, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great begining! It sounds like its going to be a great story! I cant wait to read more |
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