| "My Suru Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 12:30 CDT
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I don't know exactly what a beta reader is but I'll volunteer if you want. (I liked the last chapter. Loved it even. And the fanart, no problem. Its one of my better ones. Plz put the next chapter up soon)
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Reviewed By: Mena On: October 15, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first time at mediaminer, and I'm surprised that I found such a great fanfic here!! Usually I only look at fanfiction.net for new fics. Anyway, I really love the idea, although I'd like to see Vegeta and Goku a bit more emotional. ^.~ Oh yeah, and *I* really do like fluff and mush! *grins* LOVE THE STORY AND THE IDEA!
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Reviewed By: fireotter On: October 09, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was good i cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 12:52 CDT
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WHAT! GRRR! WHO FLAMED YOU! ASSHOLES! JUST POINT EM OUT! Seeing that English isn't your mother language, you're doing so well with this. Better then others I've seen. I'd like to see those fucking retards do any better. You're doing well, don't stop cos of flamers. I've had some myself and in the end they're just not worth the stuff that comes out of my dog's backside. I'm loving this fic, so far its the only one on my favs. That's gotta say something. PLZ CONTINUE! That was soooooo cooool! That SS4 thing! WOW!
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Title: yes finally??
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_gOOdLoOkIng On: October 03, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes great story...hehe you had me so hoping that vegeta didnt get hurt...haha i hope you keep writing some more chapters this story is really good.. oh and the 10/10 was because this fic had no flaws:)
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Reviewed By: NN On: October 02, 2003 20:46 CDT
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WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 10:08 CDT
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IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER DOESN'T IT! OH MAN, HOW CAN YOU JUST LEAVE US THERE? YOU GOTTA CONTINUE!! (And is it just me or are just me and NN reviewing. C'mon people. Prove me wrong)
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Reviewed By: NN On: September 26, 2003 20:00 CDT
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NOOO they got Vegeta and The cubs! Noooo WRITE MORE
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 (stupid school computer won't let me sign in) On: September 24, 2003 09:09 CDT
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YAY! Another chapter! You update so much, I love it! There goes Vegeta with this talking thing again? What's with that? Do they have this bond or something? Guess I'll have to wait for an answer though. The bit with Bulma getting the girls away from Goku ws good too. I got the e-mail. Thankyou. I'll try and reply sometime. I've never had a message from someone in Sweedon before. YAY! Anyway, please update soon. I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! WHAT'S VEGETA GONNA DO?????????
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 10:11 CDT
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Sweedon huh? Wow, I never read any works by Sweedish people. If I have I didn't know about it. I love it!
That thing about making a little den thing for the cubs was so sweet. It even made me go "Awwwwww" and not a lot of fics do that. The next chapter sounds interesting, at least you planned yours. I usually just make up mine as I go along. UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: NN On: September 19, 2003 20:54 CDT
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NO Vegeta can't push his cub away! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 10:16 CDT
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Ahhh, happy ending. But the cub can't die! Not after what Vegeta did to protect it! PLEASE DON'T KILL THE LIL CUBS! Still, nice story and you update so frequently, love it! But that bastard Frieza got away! At least Dedoria is dead, hope so anyway! Still, update soon. (((btw, thatnks for that. I do what I can. My e-mail is vicky.wood@virgin.net) Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: ImpBountyHunter On: September 13, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love the way you have toke the Saiyan-jin animule behaver/carcteristicks and put them together. I hope that makes since. |
Reviewed By: NN On: September 13, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sup okay I have names how about Gavin and Vance both are older names and I think both are latin |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 11:10 CDT
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Oh, I meant to send in some names but I was just stuck myself. If you search in Google or something for Japanese names then you'll probably get a load of names. It worked for me once. Still, great story, I love it! And yeah, is this dying or something or am I the pnly one reviewing. C'mon, prove me wrong people. Please update soon. Are Vegeta's cubs gonna be ok. Is he gonna be ok? And Goku? What happened to Yamcha and Tien? They dead? UPDATE! |
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