| "My Suru Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: vegges chick On: December 20, 2003 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Um I love this story but, are you sure that's the final chapter! I mean you didn't see Goku join back up with Vegeta or anything like that???? Is that really the end or are you doing a seaqule? sorry if my spelling is crap!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 12:47 CST
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Excellent work. You've really done well with this. The only thing is, the rating never went up as it probably should. Oh well, there were warnings in the summary. Well done.
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Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy GoOdLoOkInG On: December 03, 2003 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm HONEST TO ME... IM NOT COMFORTABLE WITH THIS SUBJSCT LOL SOREE FOLKz IF IM OFFENDING YOU BUT...IM STILL YOUNG...BUT BY THE WAY REALLY GOOD FANFIC I HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE IT!!
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Reviewed By: Dou's Dame On: November 10, 2003 10:58 CST
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Your summary of the next chapter REALLY bothers me: "Goku and Vegeta return to the tribe, only to discover that King Vegeta has been defeated by a younger Sayajiin. Now Goku must fight for the right of ruling his new people." Why the hell is Gokou competing for the 'throne'?!! Vegeta is the Prince of the Saiyans and once-just once in this stupid story- I would like to see him stop playing the ass-fucked bitch and kick some serious ass and lead his people as he REALLY should!!! Gokou is an outcast, he would never be accepted by the Saiyans, he's too gentle, and I fucking HATE him! You have Vegeta so OOC that's its pathetic- Redeem yourself and make him the PROPER ruler as the KING OF THE SAIYANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xotakux On: November 03, 2003 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally they are together and have bonded!!! This story is going on great,hope to see more soon!!
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 04:54 CDT
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Happy to help
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 12:30 CDT
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I don't know exactly what a beta reader is but I'll volunteer if you want. (I liked the last chapter. Loved it even. And the fanart, no problem. Its one of my better ones. Plz put the next chapter up soon)
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Reviewed By: Mena On: October 15, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first time at mediaminer, and I'm surprised that I found such a great fanfic here!! Usually I only look at fanfiction.net for new fics. Anyway, I really love the idea, although I'd like to see Vegeta and Goku a bit more emotional. ^.~ Oh yeah, and *I* really do like fluff and mush! *grins* LOVE THE STORY AND THE IDEA!
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Reviewed By: fireotter On: October 09, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was good i cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 12:52 CDT
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WHAT! GRRR! WHO FLAMED YOU! ASSHOLES! JUST POINT EM OUT! Seeing that English isn't your mother language, you're doing so well with this. Better then others I've seen. I'd like to see those fucking retards do any better. You're doing well, don't stop cos of flamers. I've had some myself and in the end they're just not worth the stuff that comes out of my dog's backside. I'm loving this fic, so far its the only one on my favs. That's gotta say something. PLZ CONTINUE! That was soooooo cooool! That SS4 thing! WOW!
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Title: yes finally??
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_gOOdLoOkIng On: October 03, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes great story...hehe you had me so hoping that vegeta didnt get hurt...haha i hope you keep writing some more chapters this story is really good.. oh and the 10/10 was because this fic had no flaws:)
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Reviewed By: NN On: October 02, 2003 20:46 CDT
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WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 10:08 CDT
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IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER DOESN'T IT! OH MAN, HOW CAN YOU JUST LEAVE US THERE? YOU GOTTA CONTINUE!! (And is it just me or are just me and NN reviewing. C'mon people. Prove me wrong)
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Reviewed By: NN On: September 26, 2003 20:00 CDT
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NOOO they got Vegeta and The cubs! Noooo WRITE MORE
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 (stupid school computer won't let me sign in) On: September 24, 2003 09:09 CDT
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YAY! Another chapter! You update so much, I love it! There goes Vegeta with this talking thing again? What's with that? Do they have this bond or something? Guess I'll have to wait for an answer though. The bit with Bulma getting the girls away from Goku ws good too. I got the e-mail. Thankyou. I'll try and reply sometime. I've never had a message from someone in Sweedon before. YAY! Anyway, please update soon. I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! WHAT'S VEGETA GONNA DO?????????
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