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Title: Sequel!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 20:52 CDT
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This little fic really needs a sequel...it would be cruel and unusual punishment if you did not continue. I really enjoyed it, it flowed very well and had a very interesting plot. It did not put either pilot in a position of weakness and that is fairly had to come by. I look forward to reading your next endevor.
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Reviewed By: Mora On: October 09, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just the perfect ending! I would love to see a sequel, so my vote goes towards that!
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 15:03 CDT
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Geez, babe...that little argument sort of thing going on at the end was hilarious! And then when Jay is like, damn I'm good! I was trying really, really hard not to crack up! I'm in a library, ya see. Anyways, pretty fabulous ending. I started suspecting Duo wasn't Treize's son, oh, I don't know when, back at like 22 or something. It's so good to be right! he hee ^_~ ^The Firefaery^
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Title: Turtle_Fire
Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A giant THANKS to you! The story is so delightful and sweet! A honeymoon to follow will definitely make it even better! A sequel pleaseeeee!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 08, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Twist. Nope I don't think I paid enough attention to those chapters. Maybe I should go back and read them. But I do remember Dou being the only one capable of using white magic. Mind you I didn't saw this coming and that is why I think this fanfic is cool. Yep, I love surprises! I can't wait to read the epilogue... I wonder will they end up together? Anywyas, keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I wonder if Heero & Duo will marry? For state reasons, of course, NOT!
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Title: Zefyr
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 10:15 CDT
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Ah, GoldenRat is sharp like that. Keeps me on my toes with Drums, I'll tell you! ---- I caught Heero's reluctance to use magic, or the way he shied from it, in previous chapters, but filed it under "think about that when I don't have a head full of plotlines"... I've been reading avidly and you've done very well with the plot twist. Often a plot twist is unsupported, and Heero's post-catastrophe confession could've been a deus ex machina except that you did support it with foreshadowing details very nicely. It makes sense, in the story, and explains a great deal. Oh, that and I absolutely adored the repartee between J and G in the last chapter. That was hysterical!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 06, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I utterly love this fanfic. I can't wait to read the finale. Keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wai! The scientists conversations are always so fun to read.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 05, 2003 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, you have to update soon. Keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 04, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No I don't like it, I love it, it's excellent and fantastic. Congratuations.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I knew it! heero was going to self-destruct to keep the portal closed. I don't understand why heero has dark power though...wouldn't he a full-blooded sanq royalty have white magic?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 03, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is pretty cool. All the unknowns, all the secrets, the lies, all work towards an awesome plot. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I kinda suspected something like that with Septim. But, still, what are Heero's two magic powers, exactly?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 01, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I love this story. I hope you update soon because I want to know what will happen the next day.
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