| "Desafiante" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really like this story. Great concept and character portrayal. I hope u write more. smiles
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens between everyone.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: April 08, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story
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Reviewed By: fire ice On: March 31, 2004 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey awesome fic! I love it. kag/sess are my fav. pairings. please update soon! your'e on my favorite list so i will be watching you it. If you do update soon i'll give you a cookie. regardless that it's invisible, you can't feel or taste it i'll still give it to you
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Title: Interesting story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Would like to know the attacker and what Sesshomaru is going to do. Also how you get Sesshomaru and Kagome together.
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Reviewed By: r14 On: December 08, 2003 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gotta hand it to you, great storyline. please continue.
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Reviewed By: kagomereborn(not signed in) On: November 18, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
argh!fine for tha cliffy i shall now hav to give my reviewers one, you evil evil evil author....and yes i am intrigued by this new development
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: November 18, 2003 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Bad Author! No Cliffies! Great fic! Love it!
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo you gotta update again... can't wait for the next chapter. Ja
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Reviewed By: MiangelisaKuroTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
oi oi!! i think i know! this new demon ish either inuyasha and kikyo's son or fluffy's son or some cousin or something like tat! ne? ne? anyways1! PLZ KEEP ON WRITING! u owe us tat!!! i was waiting for months for da next chappy to come up *likes to exaggerate* hehe^^ nyways!! GREAT STORY!! i cant wait for next chappy i do hope tat this new demon will also be rival to fluffy for kagome's love hehehehehehe^^ dunt ya just love those love triangles? i do!!! heh just a suggestion@ PLZ UPDATE!!! and tell us who tat new jerk ish! and im lookin froward to some mush with fluffy and kagome! MUST SEE FLUFFY IN ACTION!! BWHEHEHEHEH *big fan of fluffy+kagome* luv, Lilith
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TWO WORDS FOR YA! UPDATE! OK ONE WORD WITH TWO SYLLABLES BUT YOU CATCH MY DRIFT!
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think your story is good, and I hope you update soon. Good luck with your writing.=p
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yet again... awesome job! please please plase update soon! hehe! and pleaaase have a good if not happy ending! lol! i'm a sucker for those! |
Reviewed By: jubilation15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooohh, will his blood change her into some type of demon-miko???
I can't wait to find out what his blood will do to her.
Keep up the great story :) |
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 20:20 CDT
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i want to cry will u please update you doing fine it's a lil' slow but not so much as it gets boring... inner struggles are always intriging.. |
Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story so far! it's not something i heard about before! i'm really glad that your not having kagome and fluffy falling in love in like the first chapter! but i'm kind of confused... so kagome is in her own time? and inuyasha died waiting for her? and one more question... do you plan on having a happy ending??? |
Title: Bsasami
Reviewed By: Sani153 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying reading your fic. It would be nice if your chapters are a little longer. |
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate you for that evil cliffy, though i do them all the time, shame shame on you, shame on you shame on your cow....write *cries* look what you've done to me...only updating can save me
and you could have them sleep together first out of raw passion and lust and then love later |
