"Condom City" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ultima not signed in On: January 01, 2004 18:23 CST Comment/Review: ppppppppppppllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeedon't let this be a sess/kag i'll be very mad
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Title: Very cool. B^) Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 09:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good fic! Please let this be a Kag & Inu fic! I beg you don't let it work out to be a Sess & Kag! Please don't do that! Oh well, please just keep up the great work!!!! Nice chapys so far, I just know you'll just do great work on this fic!!! Bye for now!
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Title: hey update Reviewed By: fire_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 16:02 CST Comment/Review: update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it ! update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:46 CST Comment/Review: Interesting!!! Sess becoming Kag's mate? Hmmmmmm...... I like how this's going. Its intersting about the terms of the truce. I've never heard something like that before. Don't worry, its a good thing! ^^ Keep up the good work, and update soon! :) ~Rosie13
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Reviewed By: KaoruKasshin01 On: December 29, 2003 00:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay first of all, i love how you give the story time to develop instead oif jumping into things, your ewriting style is great but......please please please UPDATE i want to read more!!!!!!! Thank you for your time!
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Reviewed By: The Fallen Angel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 13:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: no offense mind you, this story is good, but what about the condoms? How many of those things does she have? oh, and 'will you be my mate' thing should happen in later chapters. its just to soon. you need more angst to make this a really good romance. but i want you to continue as soon as possible, please?
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Reviewed By: Saya Blue On: December 17, 2003 23:37 CST Comment/Review: I love your story! Please write 2nd chap! and for people who visit reviews...visit my site! http://4everdreaming.yiu.com! Spread the word people!
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Title: Kiwai Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 23:08 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is soo cute. I ador Rin she soo soo soo cute so wat is sesshomaru up wat does he want to talk about with inu yasha, and are are they gunna find out wat the mistery toy is pleaze pleaz i need to know updated soon please (keepp it up it's awsome)
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 12, 2003 02:00 CST Comment/Review: What will happen next? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: TriAnime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:26 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Cool story. PLZ write the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inu's Bitch #2 On: October 08, 2003 15:34 CDT Comment/Review: Its good so far.(hurry up and make the next chapter.)
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Title: Keep it up Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 19:32 CDT Comment/Review: I love it it's great detailed and I can't wait to have an ending. It is simply a good stroy and I'd love to read the rest as long as you update. If your not going to update anymore I'd be very pleased if you let me know I know how writters block feels. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: J.C. On: September 13, 2003 11:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it!!!!You must update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TaeRStrEak On: September 06, 2003 01:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Absolutely LOVE the story so far! Keep it up, please, and I'll positively check up on it! ^_^ Oh, and have fun writing it! It's a great idea for a ficcy.
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Reviewed By: Sessy's girl On: September 04, 2003 00:19 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! It was funny and cute. Please keep it up. Update soon! thanks |
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