| "Condom City" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Fallen Angel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
no offense mind you, this story is good, but what about the condoms? How many of those things does she have? oh, and 'will you be my mate' thing should happen in later chapters. its just to soon. you need more angst to make this a really good romance. but i want you to continue as soon as possible, please?
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Reviewed By: Saya Blue On: December 17, 2003 23:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story! Please write 2nd chap! and for people who visit reviews...visit my site! http://4everdreaming.yiu.com! Spread the word people!
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Title: Kiwai
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is soo cute. I ador Rin she soo soo soo cute so wat is sesshomaru up wat does he want to talk about with inu yasha, and are are they gunna find out wat the mistery toy is pleaze pleaz i need to know updated soon please (keepp it up it's awsome)
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 12, 2003 02:00 CST
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What will happen next? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: TriAnime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. PLZ write the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inu's Bitch #2 On: October 08, 2003 15:34 CDT
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Its good so far.(hurry up and make the next chapter.)
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 19:32 CDT
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I love it it's great detailed and I can't wait to have an ending. It is simply a good stroy and I'd love to read the rest as long as you update. If your not going to update anymore I'd be very pleased if you let me know I know how writters block feels. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: J.C. On: September 13, 2003 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!You must update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TaeRStrEak On: September 06, 2003 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely LOVE the story so far! Keep it up, please, and I'll positively check up on it! ^_^ Oh, and have fun writing it! It's a great idea for a ficcy.
Ja--
TeaRStrEak |
Reviewed By: Sessy's girl On: September 04, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! It was funny and cute. Please keep it up. Update soon! thanks |
Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Inu's bitch On: September 03, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*raises eye brow* I can't wait to find out how Inuyasha and his bro find out what condoms are really used for ;) |
Reviewed By: Flamethemightydragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! That's so funny...Update SOON! |
Reviewed By: starfire4490 On: September 03, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great.
What was the truce agreement. |
Reviewed By: Charli On: September 03, 2003 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story plz update. |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! A very well written story! I like it very much, please, update soon!!!!! |
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