| "Dogs in Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Title: Yummy!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 22:00 CDT
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Chapters 37-40... loved the conversation btwn Rin and Kagome. Loved Rin's characterization and description of Sess' house, very insightful. Loved Sess and particularly loved Inu's "That Sesshoumaru is full of shit."... the wedding was beautifully described (and i assume well researched). The consumation was scrumptious too....thx for the rec and the good read.
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Title: 10s
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 17:24 CDT
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I loved so much about this story that I will: A. Have to read it again. B. Have to write more reviews as I read it. I made the (sort of) mistake of printing it out so I could read it anywhere. It was a good thing because we had some severe storms and the computers were offline sporadically. It was also very nice that I could read it anywhere, but it messed up my reviewing. I'm just going to mention a few things off the top of my head; but there were so incredibly many things I liked I couldn't begin to enumerate them properly. I love that Souta was sent to play in the kitchen at the restaurant. What a fabulous idea. I almost didn't figure out what 'Fortunate Bangles' were. Good one. My favourite quote is "The dreams of even the fattest cats are not for the weak..." I've never heard of or seen natto, but thanks for the heads up. I loved the way you wrote all your characters; but I especially liked Hojo. I've always wondered what's up with Hojo and I think you explained it pretty accurately. Poor thing. I really am tempted to read the whole book again right now but I have homework and my 13 year old wants to spend time with me. I better take advantage of that before it passes. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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Title: Natto!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 22:14 CDT
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I'm only on chapter 3 - loved the natto scene. IY seems to have exactly my reaction to the stuff. Loved also the explaination for IY's clothes and the Fire Rats in the garden. Great! On a serious note, I really liked your characterization of the Kami. Not only was it humorous, but much more authentic as demi-magical beings as opposed to the typical "gods" we Westerners seem to reference them as. Enjoying it very much (will read the rest over time, I promise)
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 (NSI) On: November 20, 2005 23:47 CST
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"Immediately the fumes rose up making his eyes water. The stench seemed to be an unholy mixture of rotten eggs and the unwashed clothing of an incontinent old bum.The soybeans appeared to have been cooked but they were covered in a sticky white slime which made a sucking sound as he moved the chopsticks. He lifted the chopsticks and watched as a lone bean slid off to dangle by its own string of goo while many more strands slowly pulled free of the carton to simply dangle." Ewwww... Remind me never, ever to eat natto...
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this was greatI really liked it. But is it really completed? Or perhaps theres a sequal out there somewhere? Well, in any case, I really did like it. From beginning to end.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: September 05, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great its finaly done I see. Excellent work
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine (not signed in) On: August 27, 2005 14:30 CDT
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Now that's what I call a send-off! Wonderful way to end it, and the wellhouse scene was very nicely done. Bravo!!!
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Title: I got one word for you...
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUEL. Why because you still can explore Rin/Sess relationship. About Inu/Kag well let me give you a title: Pups in Tokyo.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so sentimental right now. i really loved this story. you had me lmao every other chapter! i know all good things have to end, but i'm still sad. i hope that you have plans to start another fic in the future. you are such a great author. your ideas are some of the best i've seen. you truly have to be a genius to entertain people and continue to hold their attention for so long. i will be keeping a look out for something new from you. i would recommend this fic to anyone!! thanx.
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Title: @_@
Reviewed By: Caliko not signed in On: August 13, 2005 21:09 CDT
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you left it.. THERE??? OI... /sob/ frustrated.. so ....frustrated.. lol Anywho.. Can't wait for the next chappy! ~ Caliko
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Title: Heh. Looky Here I'm no. 100
Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 16:57 CDT
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One of these days, when the story is finished, I'm going to read the whole thing from start to finish. I think I'm missing a lot but still...I really like this story. It's just sometimes I have to jog my memory. In any case, keep writing, and...pervert that I am, I can't wait for the lemon.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah! what a place to stop you big meanie. ;p this fic just keeps getting better every update. i swear you have me laughing almost every chapter. hopefully you'll have a new one up very soon. i'm looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 18, 2005 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another update wow. GO YASH
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Reviewed By: Lavender_Valentine On: July 17, 2005 16:36 CDT
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Ah, the wait to read this was *so* worth it! I especially loved this part: "W-what are you…trying to do?" "Make your bones melt." Who would suspect that Noko is capable of writing such wonderful romantic goo? It made me shiver, it did. *kiss* Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant Wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must readnext chapter I must. I must I say I must. SO UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 02:14 CDT
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I'm going to take a wild guess and say " And there goes the Barrier!!" LOL i await the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: ioialoha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 20:41 CDT
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excellent story!! really well written, good plot and everything. But who was that youkai that visited the shrine the night before the wedding? When will we find out?!?! UPDATE SOON!!!! (I'm addicted)
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: June 17, 2005 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great another chapter, and it only took me this long to read it. Could you perhaps explain more into the last part mabey?
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: KenYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely excellent! I love your story! And I look so much forward to read more of it :)))
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Title: Oi!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 11:51 CDT
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Wonderful as usual! Both this chappie and the previous one, that is! ^_^ /snicker, snicker/ thanks for the Inu torture... hehehehehe... i needed that! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine (not signed in) On: June 09, 2005 06:45 CDT
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I loved it! The wedding was too funny...how is Kagome still standing upright after all that sake? Can't wait to see what happens now that Higurashi-san has invited the demons in...
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah, Finally, they are (officially) married. they are soo crazy, it's amazing that they got thru it. wait, maybe not. what the h*ll did jukuryo get all upset for. i just know that something bad is gonna happen now!...and i can't wait either. hehe. you and your wild scenarios. did mama higurashi unwitting invite extra wedding guests? i guess i have to wait 'till the next update like everyone else. =P update when you can, onegai.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(me being lazy) On: June 08, 2005 20:14 CDT
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oh crud, kagome's mom just invited in all the mean youkai didn't she... drat her anyways..great chapter.. well update soon so i can see what happens next..(InuYasha's gonna get to fight isn't he) oh well, till the next update, Zirra
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as usual, you have dished out another great chapter. i can totally see the logic behind rin's actions. i hope kagome can make it through her big day in one piece. =P oh yes. please tell souta that i too love "lucky charms" ha ha. ^_^
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Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I darn near lost it over the ending of this chapter! The conversation between brothers was hilarious! I loved it! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 16, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet nother update.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 18:36 CDT
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d..did sesshomaru make a joke....and i quote "It would be a shame for that Inuyasha to show up at his own wedding missing his balls." Sounds like a joke to me when you think about what was said before it...wow...and i love how rin told sessy off..lol...fantastic...great chapter...lovely...can't wait for more...updates asap...can't seem to make a whole sentence in this huh?..oh well..till next time...Zirra
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:12 CDT
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Have I ever bothered to send a review where I gushed endlessly about your attention to detail and your monumental dedication to research? If not, shame on me. I've probably learned more about Japan just from reading your fic than I would have from an encyclopedia. And the ending bit with the two brothers was priceless; I'm still laughing! Please don't let them break into a fight in that tiny, tiny room... Great job! Lavender
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Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: DaisyLee1239 On: May 08, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Dogs In Tokyo lots, it's a pretty good story! And I've probably read 100 of Inuyasha stories. Yes, I know I'm a computer geek girl with nothing else to do but satisfy my anime obsession. Oh well! Anyway, keep the good work up and keep on 'postin! Thanks a bunch 'an keep up da good work!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 06, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad you upated. Cant wait to see what happens next. So update as soon as you can
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