| "Dogs in Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! I love this story - have since you began to post it. ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: dreamwalker620 On: August 11, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic! Definitely one of me faves. LOL I loved the whole random Buyo-in-the-sink scene. XDD And the rest of course. >_> Yup. I'm one of those people who goes to a palace and notices one of the chandelier candles is out. ^^; Anyways, great fic! Keep workin on it, kk? ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes review's are nice so i will give you one!! ^_^ keep up the good work that was wonderful!!! ^_^update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. So. I'm liking the cool new twists you've put in here, Inuyasha's secret house, the Staff of Heads gate and all that. That's original and neat. However, I think you're lacking in the detail department. You say Inuyasha pulls out Tessaiga to defeat the monsters, where does he pull it out from? Has Sesshomaru gated to the 20th/21st century using the Staff of Heads, or did he and Jaken just survive through all those years? And why on earth would he need body guards? What's happened to Miroku, Sango, and Shippo? It sounds like Kagome and Inuyasha have been in the future for a while now, I would think they would have gone back in time to visit their friends at least once. What exactly is Sesshomaru doing in this time besides running a theme park? You have a really fun story, but it just needs to be fleshed out some more. You seem to go from idea to idea without really expanding on what people are doing or why they're doing it. I would like to read more of this story, so please, keep up the good work. :D
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooo good keep up the good work!! ^_^ update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: July 01, 2004 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another superb chapter- I'm enjoying the story but I got a little lost at the end- Is Sesshoumaru being forced to shop with Higurashi-san? I luv Sess but serves him right. Oh yes, and the demon that Inu Yasha battled sounds like a description from LOR where I fav Grey turned White wizard battles that fire efreet!
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Title: long enough
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i didn't mind the wating as much but it was good enought to wate for keep up the good work and keep updating ~~~!!!!! ^__^ yay for u!
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Title: done
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok i only stop to watch InuYasha on TV but i finished and it was all good i can't wate till u up date it again so i can continue reading ^^ i can't wate ur s good at this i hope hojo is ok and i can't wate to read bu InuYasha and Kagome's wedding i hope i can read it soon good job! ^~ keep up the good work! hope to be reading ur wor in the futuer .... ok well adult swim is on! nbye and once again good job ....... oh and one mor this i want my COOKIE! lmhoafoomc!..(email me i u wanna find out what that means @ lovebug248@kiwibox.com) he he he he he he he *enjoys*
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Title: cookie
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's my cook i'm giveing u a great review so were's my cookie i want it !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 28, 2004 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is going very well and you're killing me with suspense! I wish someone would catch that wench and use the Staff of Heads on her! Btw, love the entrance of Sesshoumaru. Poor Dog Boy! That Hojo is such a bumble at times!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 20:04 CDT
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Again, I have to say kudos to you. This is an old issue..but I *love* the wish that you had Inuyasha make on the Shikon jewel. Talk about original! So many other fanfics have him choose to be human in a heartbreaking way since he has to give up so much of himself to do so, in order to stay with Kagome in her time. I love reading your updates because this story is truly so unique in its direction. I would love for there to be more of an eventual reconciliation b/w Inu and Sessh..I mean you'd think youkai -especially those that are related -would need to stick together in the modern day! As a huge Inu-Kag fan, I appreciate their alone time..I hope you let them have a bit more passion in between the fighting. Kinda affirmation of being alive (hentai that I am!) Ahh..and this whole "human with a bad stick opening up dimension doors" idea is really entertaining. Poor, clueless Hojo. And ouchie for Inu - poor puppy! Looking forward to the next update. :)
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: May 18, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...excellent storyline so far!:) Sesshoumaru is acting a little off kilter isn't he? hope nothing too bad happens to houjou, just cause he's clueless doesn't mean he desrves that...excellent job, and update soon!:)
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 11, 2004 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Sometimes your writing is so wickedly clean and sparse that is a tormenting tease! You do a great job telling the story but torture me by revealing little tibits, which is why I can't wait until your next installment. I'm dying to know what's going on with Sesshoumaru! And this plot twist with the Staff of Head is intriguing.
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
pleeze update soon, i wanna know what sesshomaru does!!
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Reviewed By: Turoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
So nice to come home and find you had updated. You're on my favorites list. Looking forward to more plot revelations and I/K dialog.
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