| "Dogs in Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 20:04 CDT
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Again, I have to say kudos to you. This is an old issue..but I *love* the wish that you had Inuyasha make on the Shikon jewel. Talk about original! So many other fanfics have him choose to be human in a heartbreaking way since he has to give up so much of himself to do so, in order to stay with Kagome in her time. I love reading your updates because this story is truly so unique in its direction. I would love for there to be more of an eventual reconciliation b/w Inu and Sessh..I mean you'd think youkai -especially those that are related -would need to stick together in the modern day! As a huge Inu-Kag fan, I appreciate their alone time..I hope you let them have a bit more passion in between the fighting. Kinda affirmation of being alive (hentai that I am!) Ahh..and this whole "human with a bad stick opening up dimension doors" idea is really entertaining. Poor, clueless Hojo. And ouchie for Inu - poor puppy! Looking forward to the next update. :)
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: May 18, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...excellent storyline so far!:) Sesshoumaru is acting a little off kilter isn't he? hope nothing too bad happens to houjou, just cause he's clueless doesn't mean he desrves that...excellent job, and update soon!:)
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: May 11, 2004 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Sometimes your writing is so wickedly clean and sparse that is a tormenting tease! You do a great job telling the story but torture me by revealing little tibits, which is why I can't wait until your next installment. I'm dying to know what's going on with Sesshoumaru! And this plot twist with the Staff of Head is intriguing.
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 12:00 CDT
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pleeze update soon, i wanna know what sesshomaru does!!
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Reviewed By: Turoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 19:51 CDT
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So nice to come home and find you had updated. You're on my favorites list. Looking forward to more plot revelations and I/K dialog.
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great cant whait for the next update. i rarely give a ten for originality but you have definitely earnd it
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 13:20 CST
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YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! ***GLOMPS*** I know, i know.. it's rude to glomp someone you don't know.. BUT I WAS HAPPY!!!!!!!!! Anywho, it's all starting to boil, now, so update SOON, Onegai? ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 14:51 CST
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***URRRGHHHH!!!!*** Darn it.. that was GOOD.. and it ended THERE! Gomen..just had to let that out. SOOO.. when's the next one????
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Reviewed By: Eibhlin On: March 10, 2004 00:54 CST
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Hmm...interesting idea. Although the shredding would be sacriledge. Still, perhaps the cat would be more inclined to use litterbox if she was provided with some quality reading material. And this story is definitely high-quality reading material.
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Title: argh!!!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 11:01 CST
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/sniff/ that was a mean place to leave us. /sob/ lol.. anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to more! Um.. as to printing up the story then shredding for use in cat boxes..um.. I use them for bird cages. heheheheheh Caliko
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Reviewed By: Turoosh On: March 05, 2004 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a definate knack for narration and dialog. Looking forward to the next installment. BTW Loved the reference to the exhibit at the met, really made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 19, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again--just great!! L-O-V-E this story!!!! Inu and Kag are so sweet/hot together--yeah, I'd be taking every opportunity for some 'alone' time as well ^_~ ah!! to be young and in love *sigh* now what the heck is Sesshie up to??? update soon---please??...with lumps-o-sugar......and cherry??---you can have mine, I don't like maraschino cherries--too sweet!! but I get to keep all my whipped cream!!!!! ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: February 19, 2004 13:28 CST
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I haven't finished reading this yet, but had to tell you I'm loving it!! This is a fun story--well-written and your characterizations are just great!!! I don't know why you don't have more reviews?? *shrugs* the 'fickled fate of the review button' ^_^ anywho....when I get more time later to read the rest......just great!!!........ja ne!!
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Title: Dogs in Tokyo chapter 11
Reviewed By: Diane On: February 16, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this & you don't make very many mistakes in spelling & grammar. The only thing I noticed that was off in chapter 11 was that you called it the Staff of Two Heads, it's just the Staff of Heads. Really looking forward to seeing what happens next. The schoolgirl skirt pirates bit was cute. Couldn't the house kami repair them & make more as needed? It'll be interesting to see what Inuyasha's family crest is.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 23:50 CST
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I'm only acting on the bribe of the cookie. ^^ Lol. I love the story.
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