"Dark Guardian: A tale of Rika and Renamon" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Profesional Smartass and student of the writen Word Reviewed By: Jack [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 11:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Woo! Yes! Woo! An awesome story, very well writen. It had me wanting more on each chapter. Your style is beautiful in its clear and flowing progression. Only one or two mistypes marr your preformance and are only trivialties in the grand scale. An excelent tale with a most excelent couple. I'm quite content in having had the chance to read this and I am definetly going to be reading your other works. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading them. ~Jack
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Title: the best i have ever read Reviewed By: Dev_Null On: October 24, 2003 15:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've read literaly hundreds of fanfics but this is a jewl surrounded by charcol, a flower in the desert, I know it's corny, but what do you do? I'm from sweden by the way, just wanted to say that.
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Title: If only more people wrote like this.... Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 04:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sf319 - Excellent and very discriptive, good character emotion. And Lord Takato - You trying to make starfox drown laughing?
HaXxorIzed Brilliant story. You really handled the characters well and I like the way you portray Henry, Rika and Renamon - I'd love to see those 3 work together Hold your head high - just great, up at the same Level as Archforge - who is a master |