| "Yusuke's Cousin the Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 203 ] |
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this fic u hav gotta update
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Reviewed By: Hiei Luvs Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I REALLLY like this fan fic! One of my favs! Anywho, As for how Kikyou should die... **evil grin** either a. Youko giving her a LONG painful torture b. Kagome killing her c. Somehow getting beheaded! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! You can probably guess that I hate Kikyou, and yeah, I always try to kill her in my fan fics! So, pleaz hurry up and update, I'll review when you do!
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Reviewed By: Artemis The Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a really great story. Please update as soon as you can. Good luck with the next chapter. Um I don't really know how you should kill Kikyo except it should be really slow and really painful. Can't wait for next chap so update soon. CYa
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (too lazy to login) On: October 04, 2003 23:30 CDT
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MEN as match makers? Are you damned INSANE?! They'll probably screw it up!
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmmmmmm.... well im not quite sure how kikyo should die, some painful scary yet random way i suppose. its really goo though unusual pairings which leads to really good creativity keep it up i cant wait for the next chap ^___^
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Title: i know how kikyou died
Reviewed By: hiei is mine forever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyou died from Naraku. Well his puppet of Inuyasha. She is resurected. Should I tell you something else I know everybody will be happy about. In episode 124 Naraku doesn't have onigumo's heart anymore. So he has most every jewel shard. He kills Kikyou again, by his hand, litterally. Great chap! Update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! I like how Kagome puts a subduing spell on Yusuke! I love Kag/Kur Fics! *cough cough* *hint hint*
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Reviewed By: Raquel On: October 02, 2003 04:38 CDT
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Great chapter! love the cta god kirara! though shouldnt it be cat goddess? *laugh* well never mind LOVE IT keep it up! and Botan/Inu isn't so bad, seen it before and it seemed to work!
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Reviewed By: youki kagome On: September 29, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your storie can you email me when you update thank's email me at Youkikagome@aol.com thank you!
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Reviewed By: Katzzzztar On: September 29, 2003 19:10 CDT
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since Yusuke has known Keiko(Sp?) all through childhood, does Kagome know Keiko? Or does Kagome know that she's Yusuke's girlfriend now?
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Reviewed By: Kataaa On: September 29, 2003 13:39 CDT
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Ahh there one lil' problem in ch 2. It says that Kagome' mom pulls out a frying pan to Yusuke on the head with. That should be Yusuke's mom, Kagome's mom is still back at the shrine.
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: September 29, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon ok
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Reviewed By: Priestess Jade, the witch On: September 27, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your fanfic so much that I have put you on my Favorites list. Please hurry and write some more chapters. Thanks. Also You should word on your grammar, spelling, descriptions of things on or around the charecters. If you have Microsoft Word it will help you alot. If you don't know what that program is then ignore my suggestion. It might just be certain countries that use that program(no offense cause it sometimes suck). Anyways, please hurry with the new cahpters. Many thanks. I look forward to seeing what happens to the pairings and how they get together (especially Kagomae and Kurama).
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Title: Very Funny Sis
Reviewed By: ash_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes.(I walk up to a podium that shows up from out of nowhere)My name is ash_chan,and I'm Hiei-crazy.I hope you can all support me as I get through this point of my life.Sorry.I couldn't resist.Reminder to White Fox:Get more phone cards. Luv,little sis ash_chan
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Title: PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE
Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR STORY AND I WANT TO READ MORE : )
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