| "Yusuke's Cousin the Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 203 ] |
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Title: White Fox 612's non-related Little Sister
Reviewed By: ash_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,sis!Sorry I haven't called.I'm not allowed to call anyone.Phone bill is so high,mom won't tell me about it.I got my email changed.Oh,and tell everyone That Hiei will NOT fallin love with Kagome,and that Hiei belongs to ME(AS in ash_chan)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Call me l8er. Luv,Little Sis ash_chan^_^ |
Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: September 15, 2003 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When's the next chapter. Is Hiei and Kagome going to fall in love OOOOOH I hope so I think there cut together. OH YEAH I like the story... |
Reviewed By: hiei is mine forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! update soon plz! |
Title: Review for Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ATG On: September 14, 2003 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next so please update as soon as you can. I wish you luck with the next chapter.
BYE ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! I love the story. I think that making Yusuke and Inuyasha so similar is so funny. Like SM/DM said there are some words off the page, and I'm glad that you went to black color font. Update soon! Ja Ne |
Title: I finally got to the library!Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Your Little Sis(Ash-chan no Miko On: September 12, 2003 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
S'up sis?Nice Fic.Bug your dad for another phone card.Call me L8er.Bye.^_^ |
Reviewed By: S M / D M On: September 11, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good but some of the words are off the side
of the page * stars at the comp. tring to geuss
what the words are* oh whell keep writing.
Silver Moon / Dark Moon |
Title: Just doing as you asked...
Reviewed By: Lizard Youkai On: September 11, 2003 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your fanfic, not completly original, but still, its a good fic! I really wanted to give it a higher overall score but, EGHADS! what were you thinking when you put the fic in that format?!?! its so hard to read... I keep getting lost...(Stares blankly at screen). Anywhay, keep on updating! |
Reviewed By: black canary On: September 11, 2003 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update again |
Title: Me like...but
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 11, 2003 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maa, I really like how your story is going, but could you do me a favor? Quit using those font colors. They're kinda of distracting, especially the hot pink. Besides, you want people to appreciate the content of your story not how pretty it is. Thanks. Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: tinytooz On: September 10, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorryz i forgot to rate you. ^.^ ... opps |
Reviewed By: tinytooz On: September 10, 2003 20:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE, I don't like Kuwabara is so ugle and stupid, Yukina is sweet for Kuwabara. I would like to see Kag/Kum and Sango/Hiei. A i would say so-so with Kei/Yus, he's ok but she on the other hand is annoying. SO KEEP UP THE WORK
and NO to Botan and Inu-Yasha.
Fan of yourz tinytooz (lucky you) :p |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think the story is off to a fab start and if the first chapters are a sign of things to come then the story will be great. Oh, the beads on Yusuke was brillant. I like the Kur/Kag, sang/hiei, and Yus/Kei pairings,but I'm not fond of Kuwabara/Yukina. I think she is to smart, pretty, and sweet to be with a moron like him. Oh, No Botan and Inuyasha. I don't even think that he should be in the story. |
Title: Review for Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ATG On: September 10, 2003 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter 1 and 2. I hope you will find time to update again and soon. I love the pairings but I don't think a sweet girl like Botan should be paired with a still stuck on last girlfriend guy like Inu-Yasha. Anyways I wish you luck with the next chapter.
CYA |
Reviewed By: Silver_Manticore On: September 10, 2003 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love Kag/Kur pairing!!! And so far so good,keep it up, kay'.
But can you make your chapters a little longer it's just, its kind of short, please and thank you. And don't forget to update real soon!! ^_~
Ja-ne!! |
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