| "Yusuke's Cousin the Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 203 ] |
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Title: ((Rolls eyes))
Reviewed By: Akuo On: August 06, 2010 20:41 CDT
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TAKE OFF THE DAMNED BEADS!!!!! OR AT LEAST MAKE HIM BE ABLE TO NEGATE THE ABILITY EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Azu1111111111111 On: August 06, 2010 20:31 CDT
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Stupid, WHY is it that KAGOME is the one to ALWAYS be the strong one! Can't you people EVER think of anything ORIGINAL?!? How about having YUSUKE get the beads OFF!!! He's as strong as Kagome! He's fought off tons of demons just like her! SO WHY IS SHE ALWAYS STRONG THAN HIM?!?!? Use some imagination will you!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 00:45 CDT
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this was a great story up until the end. i'm sorry but i dont like stories that end with and so something happening to make everything never have happened. it might have been ok if you had written more than the first chapter of the sequel but as it was the ending was really disappointing.
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Reviewed By: queen silence On: February 12, 2006 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is the person or demon a boy and if it is is he hojo? i think this was a good chapter.
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Reviewed By: starrchild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Personally, I wouldn't have written it any other way. I liked the pairings, too. The only reason that I rated the Spelling and Grammer as a nine is because I'm weird that way.
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Title: lmfao
Reviewed By: ancient child of blood [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chappi 7 is to freaking funny:-p
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Reviewed By: shakiluis On: January 13, 2005 17:12 CST
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Don't tell me that he is Kouga? Or even Jinengi(remember that half-demon that the villagers bullied)? Cuz if it is, I think I'm gonna scream... Don't ask why, I just will cuz I'm on sugar high right now! Ok I'm going back to your fic now bbye! Gonna review again later... I think....
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know that this is long overdue but just wanted to say its great!! oh yeah, if anyone actually reads this, does anyone know the title where i can find chap 18 on ff.net? looked but could not find.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 23:31 CDT
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chapter 'untiteled for now' should be called 'bye bye birdy' ^.^'
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 23:05 CDT
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before i go to the next chapter, it's koga!
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: July 25, 2004 18:36 CDT
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write a sequal plz this is soooo awesome
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Title: maybe?!?
Reviewed By: fallen ( 2 lazy 2 login) On: July 25, 2004 02:11 CDT
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you had beter do a sequel leaving it like that if you dont ill have to hunt you down
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Reviewed By: Dhampir (I can't sign in ^_^;) On: July 23, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write a sequal!!! I absolutely LOVE this story. Write more soon.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 16:17 CDT
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sequel please. It sounds really good, but.... I'm kinda confused too...
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Reviewed By: Robert Delaney On: July 23, 2004 14:52 CDT
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I await the sequel to thine brilliant story.
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