| "Yusuke's Cousin the Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 203 ] |
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Reviewed By: youki kagome On: September 29, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your storie can you email me when you update thank's email me at Youkikagome@aol.com thank you!
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Reviewed By: Katzzzztar On: September 29, 2003 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
since Yusuke has known Keiko(Sp?) all through childhood, does Kagome know Keiko? Or does Kagome know that she's Yusuke's girlfriend now?
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Reviewed By: Kataaa On: September 29, 2003 13:39 CDT
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Ahh there one lil' problem in ch 2. It says that Kagome' mom pulls out a frying pan to Yusuke on the head with. That should be Yusuke's mom, Kagome's mom is still back at the shrine.
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: September 29, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon ok
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Reviewed By: Priestess Jade, the witch On: September 27, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your fanfic so much that I have put you on my Favorites list. Please hurry and write some more chapters. Thanks. Also You should word on your grammar, spelling, descriptions of things on or around the charecters. If you have Microsoft Word it will help you alot. If you don't know what that program is then ignore my suggestion. It might just be certain countries that use that program(no offense cause it sometimes suck). Anyways, please hurry with the new cahpters. Many thanks. I look forward to seeing what happens to the pairings and how they get together (especially Kagomae and Kurama).
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Title: Very Funny Sis
Reviewed By: ash_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes.(I walk up to a podium that shows up from out of nowhere)My name is ash_chan,and I'm Hiei-crazy.I hope you can all support me as I get through this point of my life.Sorry.I couldn't resist.Reminder to White Fox:Get more phone cards. Luv,little sis ash_chan
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Title: PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE
Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR STORY AND I WANT TO READ MORE : )
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Reviewed By: hiei is mine forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahem! no way ash-chan! HIEI is MINE! read my p/n! unless you are to stupid to notice! um....sorry but i got kinda um....well i overeacted a little. ok a lot. let's share Hiei-chan. you take him for week days and i take him for weekends. how about that? well.....great chap! very funny! update whenever!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: September 20, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLLEEEEEAAASSEE..I love this fic its so funny HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH |
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 19:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREM ORME MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! |
Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY KIKYO DIES MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
DIE B*TCH!!!!!!!!!
oops srry got carried away thats enough |
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 18:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
YEA YEA MAKE BOTAN AND INUYAHSA A COUPLE THATS A REALLY RANDOM OE WE NEED SOMETHING DIFFERENT AROUND HERE
MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHQAHAHAHAHAHA
*yes im weird and suga high ^_^ |
Title: Domo Arigato!
Reviewed By: ash_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sis,thanks for the shout out!Once again,I shall tell the people around here,Hiei is MINE!!!! Oh yeah,it's'footsys'You spelled it right(I think).Bye!^-^; |
Title: Horray!
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 19, 2003 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I swear mediaminer is out to get me or something cause it didn't let me write a review for your story until now. Stupid uploading system. Anyway, all I wanted to say is that I love the humor in your fic. I couldn't stop laughing at the whole Yusuke perdicament. Please update soon. Ja ne. |
Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: ash_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
P.S.,sorry, I forgot to tell you sis.Your email doesn't work.Did you give me the right one? Call me!Bye,ash_chan |
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