| "One Night in Bangkok" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Strega On: October 07, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you build the desperate desire between Yami and Yugi. Before it was a night of just playing and it has turned into a frantic need. And you keep adding onto it very well. Each chapter brings more passion then the next. :) I keep wondering though at Yami's thoughts of 'forever' and Yugi's ' just tonight.' That could be a problem, no? :) Anyway, keep up the good work. I always smile to see you have added. ( Happy reader )
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Title: PURE YAYNESS!!
Reviewed By: Youko Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great and I like the way you arranged it so it is like Yugi is the angel and Yami is the demon. Wonderful!! Please update soon! I love this fic!! I don't normally like AU but this one is good!!!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (mm member) On: September 26, 2003 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: September 26, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, can't wait to read more. I love Yugi and Yami. ^_^ So perfect for eachother. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kazeya On: September 26, 2003 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! ^_^ It's really interesting, and quite original. I like the way you play with words. Very unique. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 20:19 CDT
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Wow...I'm stunned. This is SO good. I love your writing style. It's quite different (and quite good) from what I've read before. Fantastic job so far! This new universe is very cool. Definitely keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Maki831 On: September 24, 2003 04:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
A very entertaining story so far! A change from most Yami\Yugi stories I've read and written with outstanding flair. You've created a chemistry between them that just sparks in this fic. Jounouchi and Mai, too, though it isn't hard for a girl to love Jou, is it? Their interactions are actually much lighter than Yami's and Yugi's, but are fun and adorable nonetheless. In fact, I think you're balancing the intensity of the Yami\Yugi-ness and the spirit of the Jou\Mai-ness quite well. Also, I'm loving your use of metaphors! ("They spilled out of the back entrance and into the street like torn silk and splashed brandy, scattering and fleeing every which way into the safety of the darkness and the havens of a thousand crumbling corners that opened only for their children.") Really great stuff! I politely demand that you write more! I'm completely wrapped up in this story and am anxious to read what happens next!
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