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Title: 11:17 pm....Im kinda tired ^^'
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 10, 2008 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow; by reading this fic in the dark, Playing classical music (I dont like lyrics distracting me as I read ^^'), that magically matches with the stories variouse settings: muder, drugs what have you ; Just seemes to make this flow. I guess you could say it was like watching a movie of your story. I could actually see all of this, scene by scene, flowing through my mind. I think it was, as I said, the music, the dark setting, and your writting. Wonderful read, great work! And apperently, as it gets later, I become comma happy ^^' Thanks for posting, looking forward to seeing more of your work XD
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: November 06, 2004 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a wonderfull part I read from your hand. Really amazing, your writting style takes my breath away.
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Reviewed By: Trinity-Destler On: May 31, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was utterly poetic. Beautiful.
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Reviewed By: RianneHime On: May 15, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I've read, I swear it to God. It's sultry, to sum it up in one word. It's gritty, it spares no details from both the hard knocks and the captivating dark quality of the night life in a dirty city. Its sexy, and leaves you with that eerie aching wanting feeling after you've finished it, because you want it to never end and never want to be rid of the emotions that good writing evokes. It's dark, and leaves you wondering if morals and inhibitions are such a good thing to have after all. . . It's also tender, in the way you make the darkness enwrap them both, and yet their feelings for each other shine true through the whole thing to the very end and beyond. No doubt, no uncertainty when faced with the other . . . you've managed to make sin beautiful, and even realizing this . . . All I can say is . . . wow.
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Reviewed By: al On: March 25, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is definitely my favorite yugi/yami one. i love AU even though i never figured out what it stands for.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (mm member) On: December 12, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Hell yeah! That was sooooooooooooooo good! I love you so much!
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Reviewed By: Falcona SkyWolf On: December 04, 2003 12:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohhh, I wish the boys was here ta read this! *gasping for breath and struggling not to cry in public library* WOW! Dia-san, this is heartbreakingly ADORABLE! KAWAII!!! Thank you so much for yet another excellent fanfic!
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins and cackles and cheers* THIS is the best Yu-Gi-Oh lemon fic I've ever read. You are my favorite YGO author- ever. I've read tons of your stories, and this one is definitely the best. I wonder, though, what happened to Jou and Mai? They're the only het couple I support. Perhaps a side epilogue is in order. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Stella-chan On: December 03, 2003 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I enjoyed this story sooo much...it has to be one of the sweetest and most romantic I've ever read....*crying, stamping foot petulantly* I want another one! Another one, I tell you! Seriously, you have to be one of the best writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and I look forward to more of your stories....keep up the good work! Yami & Yugi forever!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so cool! it was great! but now its over *cries* write another!
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Reviewed By: Strega On: December 02, 2003 19:04 CST
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Fluffy but nice and I was pleasantly surprised to see you added a chapter. After all, I knew that there wasn't any deadly sins left for you and that meant no more chapter names...no more chapters. I actually wanted there to be more deadly sins....just so I could read more :) (Does that even make sense?) Does this mean you are going to keep writing for this story? (Big Puppy Dog eyed look) Pu-lease!
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Reviewed By: Youko Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH WOW!!! I love this ending. It is so sweet. I would have cried from the perfect romance and your style of writng.if it hadn't been so kawaii!! i know I already reviewed on one of your previous chapters, but this is an update. ~Takes a deep breath and then sreams~ I LOVE THIS FIC! YAY YOU! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER ONE SOON! whew... anyways. great job and I absolutely adored the ending. I am definetly going to miss this story.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 17:27 CST
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^_^ Awww, kawaii ending. Yami & Yugi, together forever!! Yay!! Just how I always love it!! Well, ja ne!! Write a new fic soon!
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutly wonderful story! Thank you, please keep writting.
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutly wonderful story! Thank you, please keep writting.
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