| "One Night in Bangkok" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 16:50 CST
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I'm trying to remember how to breathe after reading that chapter. It's so damn freakin' wonderful!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: dark selene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! I wanted to kill ya for the almost-but-thankfully-not cliffy, I swear when Yugi doubted I could have killed ya. This fic is pretty good! I liked it a lot and I'll promise to check (and review) ur works
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Reviewed By: Sean Wright [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful read. I enjoy the style, the characters and the story. I just wonder how it's going to end.
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Reviewed By: BOF (flamebirdphoenix@hotmail.com) On: November 01, 2003 00:25 CST
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Wow. I don't know what else to say really...just...wow. That rating system up there doesn't even come close. I'd say you're a perfect 100. The mood, the passion, the longing and lust...it all blends together in a wonderous whirlwind of emotions. I LOVE fics like this. Where it conveys the emotions so painfully realistic. It makes you crave it, feel it, and experience it. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Evil Chibi Malik (from FF.net) On: October 24, 2003 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...wow...this is REALLY good!!! i can't wait for the next chappie!!! ^_______^ and as Yami said in the previous chappie. kawaii. ^^ SUGOI!! i love all your fics!!! oh and Ankharue says he likes this too. ^^ okay now, ja!! *gives you Pocky*
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Title: You're bloody brilliant
Reviewed By: Strega On: October 24, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the story was good....and then I realized it's brilliant. I've really never paid attention to the 'One Night in Bangkok' song. I went a looked up the lyrics and suddenly realized......your bloody brilliant! Now I understand why Yugi and Yami were playing chess. (I didn't understand why Bangkok, why Chess, & why so many bars. Yes, I was clueless) Extra kudos on the last chapter. Yami's desperate plea for Yugi was moving. Yami's shrieking frustration and fury was a perfect reaction to Yugi's rejection. How else would the Dark act to be refused by Light. As I said, brilliant. You're definitely up there when it comes to the Yugi-Genre fan-fiction authors. Please don't stop!
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Title: Weird cat-mages out to make a killing.
Reviewed By: Kaial and Luke SkyWolf On: October 23, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crying. Drooling. Trying to remember how to breathe (look mighty odd should we pass out in a library). Masterfully written. Booted from ff.baka, eh? Go figure. Least we knew where to find you, eh?
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Reviewed By: Mononoke I cant log in right now so bear with me, kk? On: October 23, 2003 16:18 CDT
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I was wondering where you had run off to. I first saw this on ff.net, but then you disapeared and whoah! I realy realy realy realy love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 18:05 CDT
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*sighs dreamily* Wonderful chapter, beautifully written, awesome job. I can't get over how damn good this story is, it's always so cool every time I reread it. Well, update soon!! Hey, is there going to be a lemon in the story?
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: October 19, 2003 18:53 CDT
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Wow... intriguing fic. Very unique, very different, but very good! I like your writing style, because it moves so quickly and definitely keeps the reader in the story. I don't usually prefer the Yugi/Yami pairing, but it works in this story. By the last part of the chapter I was gritting my teeth in anticipation for what was to come. And then, of course, I got to the end... sigh. Oh well, I'll be looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Stella-chan On: October 12, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Edmondia-san, you rock!!!I absolutely *love* all your stories....and I've printed them all, just so I could go back and read them whenever I felt like it....I adore this story so, it's so well written....I can't wait for the rest....Please put Yami out of his misery...let him get some! *lol*...I hope he and Yugi end up together...I don't want them to end up as a one night stand...the chemistry between them in this story is just so *eloquent*.... I heard about what happened on ff.net, and I'm outraged....why do people do malicious things like this? I makes me despair of human beings...in any case, you have my unflinching support, and I hope you continue to write your wonderful stories despite the numerous idiots of the world....Ganbatte kudasai, ne?
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Reviewed By: Sean Wright [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 13:52 CDT
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This was very good.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 18:53 CDT
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The way you write your stories are incredible!! It's so descriptive, especially the part where Yugi's um, doing naughty stuff with Yami. It's ok though, I don't mind. If anything, please continue!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 15:09 CDT
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I really, REALLY like this fic. I hope you continue with the next chapter soon. I love your writing style!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Chibi Neko On: October 08, 2003 17:30 CDT
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My my my, naughty naughty Yugi-chan! It's a good thing my parents aren't at home, 'cause if they knew I was they would totally flip. Anyhoo, I really enjoy your story, and the only thing I can say is get those two out of the fucking bar and into a hotel room or something!! C'mon!!! Nyan! >^.^<
Chibi Neko
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