| "Tearing Down the Sky" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *GLOMP* Oh my gods I found youy again! When I saw that you weren't on ffnet anymore I cried! I thought I'd never get to see your work again, or get to finish your tearing down the sky story! But I gave it one last ditch effort here because I had tried before and you weren't listed here. I'm soooooooo glad that i found you again! and I love how you ended the story, and I am sooo glad that Keith died and please write more very very very soon! We love you and I am soooo glad that you're back! *DOUBLE WHAMMY GLOMP!!*
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Reviewed By: RyouLuver On: July 16, 2004 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!!!!!11 I printed all the pages out from three yamis and a hikari, Ihatit. I crave it, and tearing down the sky!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you write more!!!!! They FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I may be a bi but you're my favoritis author !!!!!!!!!1 Wait........that didn't even make sense....... oh well ^-^
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Reviewed By: Moosenogger On: July 07, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I LOVE this story! *cries* I just can't believe it's over. ;_; I've just been reading along with the updates for so long now, I feel kinda lost. All well, I'll just have to keep up with Burning Sea. Hope that one has a ways to go before it ends. o.O I wuv you, Hato, and I absolutely HATE Fanfiction.net for deleting you!!!
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Reviewed By: silver ferret (if only i could log in) On: July 04, 2004 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was Awesome! I love how it ended! The people at fanfiction are meanies, and the person that kept reporting you must have been a jerk. Your writing is great! Keep it up!
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: PeRiDoTs13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. I really enjoyed this one. Into Araboth, eh? How interesting.
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Reviewed By: PeRiDoTs13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sucks that you got deleted off ff.net. I like the style of that site better than mm.org, but oh well. I have to say, I'm not enjoying this fic as much as I've enjoyed some of your others, like Koibito Yami. I loved that fic. This ones a bit more blah to me. I just feel this is a bit sappy, in a bad way. I liked it better in the beginning, but you're sort of dragging it out now. Not that it's bad or anything. Just not as good. I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: July 02, 2004 04:44 CDT
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i loved the ending i see ffn did it agian just forget about them I wrote them a bigg meeean letter o how there not beinb fair
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Title: VERY VERY GOOD!!!
Reviewed By: GirlMaverick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiting for you to update on fanfiction.net but it dissapeared. Then I found it here. It was REALLY good. *applauds*
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Title: aka: blu chocobo
Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* That was beautiful!! Keith is dead, and everything is at peace^^ How awkward it must be to change like that in the middle of sex and everyone coming in to see. That was also a sweet lemon you wrote! This is my absolute favorite fic ever! You keep us on our edges until the end. You've truly written a masterpiece!^^
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: June 29, 2004 13:07 CDT
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Hey I see you have tearing down the sky hear i realy love this storie . I think you should just give up on fanfiction net there jerks they didn't have to dele oll of the stories I think you shooud givee this web site and adult fan .neeet a chance and put your lemons in there that way if you want to you can put them in millium balaace and bring the storie sorry over here
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: June 29, 2004 13:06 CDT
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Hey I see you have tearing down the sky hear i realy love this storie . I think you should just give up on fanfiction net there jerks they didn't have to dele oll of the stories I think you shooud givee this web site and adult fan .neeet a chance and put your lemons in there that way if you want to you can put them in millium balaace and bring the storie sorry over here
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Title: Holy, Unholy!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(now if I could just log in . . . ) On: June 29, 2004 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best. Fic. Ever. Or at least it's up there. There're just to many points to go into on why this was just so damn good, but I'll just concentrate on a few. Well 1) It centered on Ryou and Bakura. 2) This was one of those few fics where R isn't beaten by B (Gods that gets so annoying after awhile.) 3) Sort of tied into 2, at the end B is so very comforting and caring to R, he is almost the complete opposite of what we usually see. 4) You killed Keith. 5) Bakura ends up with black angel wings and a halo of fire [black fire? *gets hopeful look in her eyes] 6) So frighteningly original (and yet so very familiar to my own private warped little universe) that I think this story will by haunting me for awhile. 7) The fact that my mind is now filled with angel/demon images of my favorite parings, along with black angel wing styles. Ok, so now 1 question that you will hopefully put up an answer in your look up for, what will Yami and Marik smell like? Ok final thing, I know it's not your fault, but if you can, try to figure out the mysterious symbols so you can clean the look of this fic up. Well I liked this, so I hope to read other works by you. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: mexicaligrl14 On: June 28, 2004 12:51 CDT
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that was such an awsome ending. Keith's finaly dead! YAY!!! I really liked how bakura became an angel at the end but still had black wings. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: nel On: June 28, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooooooooo sweet. I loved it! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: QueenofGames2 On: June 25, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Gods of Ra when I noticed it had been removed from FF.net I had a bloody heart attack! And oh the joy when I found it here! EEEP! Gods above I can't believe it's truely over! And WOWZA what an ending! Haha Keith got his kumupitz and Bakura's an angel O.o interesting.... But :::Tear:: it's over! ::cries hysterically:: WHYYY Geez I miss a few days from you and suddenly it's all over and done with! Well now what am I going to look forward to? You have no idea how excited I got when I found you had up dated! I mean damn it was like I saw Bakura naked or something! (snickers) Well it was deffenetly a fantastic ending, one I hope you are very proud of because I know I am. I will miss this story, but it will live on in my "Finished Stories" file! The *Queen Of Games*
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