| "Tearing Down the Sky" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: PeRiDoTs13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. I really enjoyed this one. Into Araboth, eh? How interesting.
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Reviewed By: PeRiDoTs13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sucks that you got deleted off ff.net. I like the style of that site better than mm.org, but oh well. I have to say, I'm not enjoying this fic as much as I've enjoyed some of your others, like Koibito Yami. I loved that fic. This ones a bit more blah to me. I just feel this is a bit sappy, in a bad way. I liked it better in the beginning, but you're sort of dragging it out now. Not that it's bad or anything. Just not as good. I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: July 02, 2004 04:44 CDT
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i loved the ending i see ffn did it agian just forget about them I wrote them a bigg meeean letter o how there not beinb fair
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Title: VERY VERY GOOD!!!
Reviewed By: GirlMaverick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiting for you to update on fanfiction.net but it dissapeared. Then I found it here. It was REALLY good. *applauds*
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Title: aka: blu chocobo
Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* That was beautiful!! Keith is dead, and everything is at peace^^ How awkward it must be to change like that in the middle of sex and everyone coming in to see. That was also a sweet lemon you wrote! This is my absolute favorite fic ever! You keep us on our edges until the end. You've truly written a masterpiece!^^
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: June 29, 2004 13:07 CDT
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Hey I see you have tearing down the sky hear i realy love this storie . I think you should just give up on fanfiction net there jerks they didn't have to dele oll of the stories I think you shooud givee this web site and adult fan .neeet a chance and put your lemons in there that way if you want to you can put them in millium balaace and bring the storie sorry over here
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: June 29, 2004 13:06 CDT
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Hey I see you have tearing down the sky hear i realy love this storie . I think you should just give up on fanfiction net there jerks they didn't have to dele oll of the stories I think you shooud givee this web site and adult fan .neeet a chance and put your lemons in there that way if you want to you can put them in millium balaace and bring the storie sorry over here
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Title: Holy, Unholy!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(now if I could just log in . . . ) On: June 29, 2004 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best. Fic. Ever. Or at least it's up there. There're just to many points to go into on why this was just so damn good, but I'll just concentrate on a few. Well 1) It centered on Ryou and Bakura. 2) This was one of those few fics where R isn't beaten by B (Gods that gets so annoying after awhile.) 3) Sort of tied into 2, at the end B is so very comforting and caring to R, he is almost the complete opposite of what we usually see. 4) You killed Keith. 5) Bakura ends up with black angel wings and a halo of fire [black fire? *gets hopeful look in her eyes] 6) So frighteningly original (and yet so very familiar to my own private warped little universe) that I think this story will by haunting me for awhile. 7) The fact that my mind is now filled with angel/demon images of my favorite parings, along with black angel wing styles. Ok, so now 1 question that you will hopefully put up an answer in your look up for, what will Yami and Marik smell like? Ok final thing, I know it's not your fault, but if you can, try to figure out the mysterious symbols so you can clean the look of this fic up. Well I liked this, so I hope to read other works by you. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: mexicaligrl14 On: June 28, 2004 12:51 CDT
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that was such an awsome ending. Keith's finaly dead! YAY!!! I really liked how bakura became an angel at the end but still had black wings. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: nel On: June 28, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooooooooo sweet. I loved it! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: QueenofGames2 On: June 25, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Gods of Ra when I noticed it had been removed from FF.net I had a bloody heart attack! And oh the joy when I found it here! EEEP! Gods above I can't believe it's truely over! And WOWZA what an ending! Haha Keith got his kumupitz and Bakura's an angel O.o interesting.... But :::Tear:: it's over! ::cries hysterically:: WHYYY Geez I miss a few days from you and suddenly it's all over and done with! Well now what am I going to look forward to? You have no idea how excited I got when I found you had up dated! I mean damn it was like I saw Bakura naked or something! (snickers) Well it was deffenetly a fantastic ending, one I hope you are very proud of because I know I am. I will miss this story, but it will live on in my "Finished Stories" file! The *Queen Of Games*
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Title: Wow..
Reviewed By: Deme, too lazy to login in again [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seeing as how I can't finish is on fanfiction (read your bio) I read it here. Wow... wow is what I say. You are a friggin' genius. That was one of the most beautiful stories I have EVER read, if not the MOST beautiful. That part when Marik killed Keith and said how he has wished he had done it sooner, maybe Ryuugi would still be alive, had me in tears for about 5 minutes. And I like that M.C Gland, lol G-Spot XD Bakura is crazy. Also, I WAS NOT expecting that transformation with Bakura, from a demon to an angel, cool.. Will it happen to Marik and Yami too? Duh.. lol ^-^ Your ideas are awesome, and so are your writing skills, I commend you. I'm sad though.. no more Tearing Down The Sky updates for me.. ;-; I'll live, but update your other stories whenever you get the chance too, okie, thank you. I love you, bye bye. :P
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm... Jasmine and Gardenia... I love those two. And I love the way this fi ended. It was a wonderful ending, and I like the way that Bakura changed at the end. Wonderful, and I hope to talk to you more!
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Title: I'm also Angel Reaper from FF.Net
Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 18:22 CDT
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O.O Oh holy Ra... the ending was absolutely wonderful and beautiful, hato-chiisai!! I love it so much, especially the way the lemon ended. *wipes drool away* Oh, now I want to go sniff gardenia and jasmine!! And I'm so glad that Marik killed off Keith like that... molto bravissimo! Er, ignore the Italian... ja ne!
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Deme, too lazy to login in On: June 24, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You're posting on mediaminer, and the words aren't icky and jumbled up! AWESOME... anyway, I'm already reading this lovely story on fanfiction.net so.. I'll just finish it there.. *lazy* GREAT FIC! ^^ .. wow, lol XD
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