| "Sleepless in Sohma House" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was one heck of a story! I am very impressed as I had been looking for another good Tohru and Akito pairing. I kind of figured that the ring had something to do with the curse when you did that flashback somewhere in the story lol. I am glad things ended the way they did as I was hoping that the curse would be broken and all could live happily ever after. It was also a nice touch having Akito's half brother show up at the end and having the cat be part of the family again. Of course I guess all the animals disappeared once the curse was broken. I am glad they did not die though. If you are still writing I would love to see another pairing of Tohru and Akito. I think they do make such a great couple together. Oh and one comment on the yaoi. While I normally do not read it, I thought it was tastefully done. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man....i cant even say it word it was like i was there lik wen yuki got made at tohru n said i dont want to see u anymore move out i wanted to cry man if i have the skills u do I WOULD B FAMOUS!but sadly am only half way there
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Reviewed By: Kitsunes Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHHAHA i loved it the whole damn thing (excuse the language) every part. I LOVE KYO AND BLACK HARU especially how you portrayed them!! and if no ones ever told you this i will, you are a WONDERFUL authoress!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Deadly Wispers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! i've waited for that for so long! ^_______________________^ i love how you have thes evil prince yuki sohma fan club girls coming in then-- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ^^
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Reviewed By: Deadly Wispers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 17:04 CDT
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AWW, THAT'S SO SAD! T.T i love your fan fics! they're funny, cute, sad (in a good way) , touching, and a whole lot more than i can discribe! it's so sweet! ^^
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Reviewed By: Deadly Wispers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! i love that! "Five second rule!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! i'm gonna continue readin' now! ^^
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Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was FANTASTIC!!!! ^____^ It was the best FB fanfic I've read so far! ::glomps author:: Through all the crap in life, you perservered! Congrats! I'll be looking out for your other stories!!! ^_^
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Title: Speechless and Sleepless
Reviewed By: Lady Indigo Star On: April 29, 2004 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I can't tell you how much I love this story. This is spectacular. Fantastic. Beautiful. Moving. None of these are working for me... The Haru/Yuki was my favorite, do more of that. And I'm glad you love your readers; makes me all happy!! I loved the stuff you did with the curse. That was very original, and very entertaining. your grammar was...less than good, but I have heard your reasons, and accept. It's a good thing, editors. Overall, a beautiful, hauntingly well-done story, and I am very pleased. So hurry up and write some more, because I'm an impatient girl. ^ ~
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 03:50 CDT
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*worships you* great story..cant belive it's almost 5 am..i spent all night reading the entirity of it..ohh well...Thanks for Writing an amazing story... Kix (i'm cute, i'm sweet, i'm a delicious nutricious treat*winks*)
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Reviewed By: hikaru yuki On: April 13, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent fanfic!! i used to hate the tohru x akito pairing before this, but this fanfic is totally awesome! i havent watched all of furuba yet, but your fanfic made me believe that that was actually the curse (or am i just gullible..) wonderfully written! and yup, you gotta love akito (my favorite character) and its amazing to see him all nice and happy ^-^ once again, great work!
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Reviewed By: shadowslayerprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!
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Title: aaak
Reviewed By: senritsu On: February 27, 2004 10:45 CST
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i was up until .... lets just say i still havent fallen asleep and now i'm at work reading your story... i couldnt stop i read a chapter and said i should go to sleep at the end of this one but no! it was too good to stop reading aaaaaaaaaaarrrrggggghhh
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Reviewed By: iLoveHarU On: February 06, 2004 20:00 CST
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Well,I finally decided to review.I have been here since you first started this fanfic.And well I always loved it!Hehe,But I was waiting for the end and well now I don't want it to end! but I guess it's better if you leave it at that. Oh no!But wait Uo and Kyo lemon chapter first!Hehe...I just adore your fabulous work.You brighten the day...Don't I just sound like a Hallmark card??
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Reviewed By: awintersrose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Simply one of the BEST fanfics that I have ever read, from a very talented author. The ending made me all smiley (not an easy feat, I assure you). Mad props. Your stories rock.
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Reviewed By: macbaby On: February 02, 2004 00:48 CST
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I loved this fic! Maybe an update on kyo/uo later? One of the best I read! Great job!
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Reviewed By: MiangelisaKuroTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUST GREAT!!! I LOVE THE ENDING!!! I COULDNT STOP SMILING AND IT ALMOST BROUGHT TEARS OF JOY TO MEH EYES!!! OBSOLUTLY WONDERFUL! as soon as the ring disapperaed i knew that the curse was broken and they just seem like idiots for not trying to it out! hehe and besides you just dont seem like the evil type who ends their ficies with tragedy you know^^ waaa~~~~~ i absolutly love it!!! but you know who was left behind..? MEH FAVORITE CHARA!! HANAJIMA-CHAAAN!!!! you just HAVE to pair her up with someone!!! i always thought she and gure-chan would make an interesting couple^^ i mean its just a suggestion but can you perhaps put it in your little request book? ne ne??? onegaaiii shiiimaaaasuuu *giggles* anyways! besides that the whole ficy was just...brilliant! i dont even have good words to describe meh feelings well ye blah blah i talk too much but im just soo excited! i think im gonna go read the rest of your ficies now!! so expect some replies from meh^^ once again thank you for writing such a wonderful story^^ i really enjoyed reading it!! luv, ~Lilith~ p.s. and the thing that you did with all the past and how the curse began was very interesting and seemed like a real thing^^ i also loved the fact that tohru named her daughter(and i wasnt even suprised that it was girl b/c there is no way tohru would have a boy!) after her late mother! that was also very thoughful of you^^
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Reviewed By: Shiara Ramone On: January 21, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I can't believe you did that, I feel so special now. Love it and can't wait for you to finish it compleatly and tie up all the lose ends. Other then that, I don't see anything majorly wrong with it, but then again I'm not that good at catching errors myself.
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Title: GREAT JOB!!!
Reviewed By: Happy Moon On: January 21, 2004 10:33 CST
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Great Job. I enjoyed this fic a lot. Please tell me you're not done!? I really do like this fic!!!
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Title: awwww.....how sweet
Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think akito so need Tohru.....and Kyo with Uo sweet man. (^_~)
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Reviewed By: ocasa_no_yumi On: January 05, 2004 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was great! probably one of the best lemons i read in a while! kepp it up! ;D Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Shiara Ramone On: December 30, 2003 15:03 CST
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Good job. Definately like this one better then the other. Keep it up.
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Title: Nekochan
Reviewed By: ocasa_no_yumi On: December 29, 2003 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!! i love it... teehee. i can't wait to read the others, tho i may get a bit jealous of Uo if you do end up doing a Kyo/Uo thingy :) Any who, can't wait for more! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 03:56 CST
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very good job with the lemon!! I'm hoping for a Tohru/Akito one next!!
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Title: =D
Reviewed By: Raechan On: December 28, 2003 21:58 CST
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Yah! Just what I needed a good Yaoi fic XD. Great job ^^.
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Reviewed By: tite_mouche On: December 25, 2003 17:33 CST
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its really god , write 2 versions it will be more fun to read
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Reviewed By: MiangelisaKuroTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTLY ABSOLUTLY ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS FICCCY!!!!! and even though im a huge fan of kyo kyo-kun i still think da pairin of thoru and akito is perfect here^^ he deserves a break! i actually begin to like him^^ see wat u did??? and i adore Uo-chan! so ye!! they r perfect together!! next ish u better find a suitable lover to meh fav. chara hana-chan^^ *glomps her hana and kyo plushies* i was thinkin... if gure-chan isnt gay i mean REALLY gay shouldnt those two be together?? or he already has Mit-chan? *cackles evilly* well in any case! u should continue writing this great ficy of urs! though i am very very very sad tat akito ish gonna die...cant u make an exception and make this completely occinessy and let akito live..? for da sake of our prince yuki? pweeeez? in ur next ficcy u can chop him to tiny peaces and than burn him or grill him and scatter his filthy remains to da 5 corners of da earth well w/e u wana do with him just make him liiiive in this ficy *cries* well anyhows!!!!!! UPDATE A.SA.P.!!! PLEEEASE!!! *bows* domo^^
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Reviewed By: Happy Moon On: December 17, 2003 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I got grounded. I hope that doesn't EVER happen to you! Terrible business that. . . Anyway!!! Please don't stop Ur fic just yet! PLEASE DON'T!!!! It's wonderful, magnificent, and stuff. Although, I didn't expect what happened to happen. Tohru a slut? They really had no faith in her. I think that they should understand she was just confused. I mean, who wouldn't be? After all, if Yuki hadn't been so swift to judge TOhru, and Kyo hadn't been so hard either, I'm sure she would have eventually understood that what she felt for them was just love of a friend. MAn! I'm so involved with your story!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!
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Reviewed By: macbaby On: December 16, 2003 14:26 CST
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You have just got to stop leaving us hanging!!! I am pulling my hair out here, this is just tooo good!!
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Reviewed By: tite_mouche On: December 15, 2003 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read the fanfic and its really cool and fun to read but....... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINISH IT!!!! please!!! i cant wait anymore
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Yuki_lover On: December 15, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Over the past week i've re watched the fb series and I've decided that I really,really don't like Tohru. On the other hand I think i'm growing a liking for Haru and Yuki ^_^. Although...I still kinda wish that Tohru and Yuki were together. (i'm off the subject) So anyway, You story is really good and I always HAVE to read it when you update, so hurry up and post the next chapter!
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