| "Destinies Collide" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Reviewed By: maisama On: September 29, 2011 02:29 EDT
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Darn, 5 years. Time goes by fast. |
Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 11:03 EST
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plz update soon i really really loved it and i read it for the second time!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 10:26 EDT
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plz update plz plz plz plz plz plz plz i must know what kagura wants to do to kagome!!!!!!! and i must know if inuyasha can controll the neclece plz update soon!!!!
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update again soon. Can't wait to read what happens with Kagome
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 19:52 EST
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ok i like your plot and all but its so long andyou havent updated in forever so update(please ;( and go down on the dialogue and just go with the flow sends writing vibes
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Reviewed By: Chelsey On: September 04, 2006 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that u have a very good plotline going here but the story gets very long and boring at many times! Im getting very sick of reading page after page with little or no plot development. Your story is very inconsistent, it might start moving faster then just slow down again.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. A mystery in itself. Update soon please.
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Title: GAAAAAAA
Reviewed By: CanaryDiamond122 On: April 13, 2006 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gaaaaa... All of the build up and tention. I cant take it. Get on with the rescuing already. its such a good story but so hard to read. Inuyasha's hopless behavior and the continuing kidnapping of kagome is tearing me apart. Inu and Kags havent even properly spent time together. Its all so damn frustrating. Something has got to give. If you are simply tring to keep the story going..stop. But somehow i trust you have a plan. I look forwrd to future instalments.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far. But is anything good going to happen soon i juswt hate suspense. But definatly keep writing. I'm dying to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (n.s.i.) On: April 01, 2006 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was interesting! That chapter was so creative! I don't think I could ever have thought up some of that stuff. On yeah, this one's a keeper! I don't think I was much help but you're welcome anyway. I personally like my stories long and to have the plots complicated. I want to read things that make me think and keep my overactive imagination entertained. I can't want for the next chapter!
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Title: Okay
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 10:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I like your story a lot but it's taking a long time to get to the point. Plus, it's hard to know who's talking when you switch POV and don't mention who's talking until the end. But that's my opinion, lots of other people probably disagree.
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Title: Ibsmiley
Reviewed By: ibsmiley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOV UR FIC! but i would like 2 c u update more offten though im doing just a bad job on my fan fic. Love ur overall story and your way of writing just makes it better...if i wrote it it would be much shorter and more boring!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness n.s.i. On: January 01, 2006 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't you just love it when your internet goes down? Anyway awesome chapter!!!! I love the whole thing about Inuyasha being confronted by both his sides!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be waiting right here for it!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 03:53 EST
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the fic totally rocks
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *nsi* gwrawr On: December 29, 2005 03:43 EST
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ack! I'm so confused! Glad to see that you are alive and kicking! *throws confetti* Please keep up the great work! I'm off to reread this bad boy! lol Update asap! WELCOME BACK! -Krystal-
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