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Reviewed By: Miko_Kissi21 On: October 04, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Keep going. What's going to happen next?
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Reviewed By: Ayame_wolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 12:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should post more of this story i want to see what happens. 10/10
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm sounds good,and please more chapters,or make it longer.Any way good story!
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Reviewed By: DarkAya On: October 04, 2003 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the beggining very much, hope you can keep it up
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Reviewed By: GuardianWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the set up please continue... I want to see where you take this
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Reviewed By: dragonrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
youve got a good start... a good lead in... two notes... one try to lengthen your chapters so that there is more substance to each of them... and two... the authors name is Rumiko Takahashi...
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