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Reviewed By: IotaTheSweet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I luv this fic it like soooooo awsome. PLease update soon or my minions will just 'happen' to find u. lol ~Jinxie-chan
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Reviewed By: Ken~ On: November 17, 2003 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its bout time you upfated! keep writing and im waiting for more!
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Title: lo!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya! GOOOOOOOD Chapter! nice and fluffy! LOVED it! love all the nice fluff! hehe-good job! hmm...is Shippo gonna find out? hehe-ne wayz, good job! thanks a lot for all the fluff and happiness, cuz bout ta read an Angst story! eep! well-good ob n i hope ya can keep on scheduel! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Aly10 On: November 16, 2003 21:21 CST
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You gotta update more often! I love your story!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: November 16, 2003 08:23 CST
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y wont they tell sango n miroku? they are their friends! think kag! think inu! lol nice chap =)
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: November 16, 2003 08:23 CST
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awww inu n kag r soooooooooo adorable!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: November 16, 2003 08:17 CST
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awww inu n kag r soooooooooo adorable!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 05:21 CST
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aww. i love that chapter! it was so cute. it made me jelous. *sigh* can't wait for more! up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 01:13 CST
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mm, thats so cute! i love it! keep up the good work and up date soon!!
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Reviewed By: Eliaz On: October 25, 2003 22:41 CDT
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Great chapter! Update soon!!!
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeee!!! KAWAIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!! *squeals more* ee! i LOVE it!!!! soooo cute! i really can't wait for another chapter! u r gonna continue rite? rite? *panicks and runs around as inuyasha hits her on head* owww*rubs head* well, i take it hope fully u will! good job! nice n fluffy! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Kestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, keep it up. also, you have a few of your terms messed up. His billowy pants are called Hakama, and his white shirt is either called a Gi or a kimono. The haori is correct. Just thought you would like a little friendly heads up on that.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 03:21 CDT
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Don't forget to up date! i want to know what happens in the morning! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: c_vega On: October 17, 2003 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're doing a great job. And don't worry about commas and such, they are minor in the grand scheme of things anyways. Your story is very enjoyable, and I love how it is progressing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Happy endings are a good thing by the way! *hint, hint, nudge, nudge* And don't worry about not being able to write a lemon, your lime was quite good. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: AlCk On: October 12, 2003 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this story! PLZ update soon!
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