| "Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 10:25 CDT
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Oh, that cliffy!!! I need to know what is going to happen next. Please update soon I really like this fic so far.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 19:41 CDT
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*too busy adding story to my favorites to write a review*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 19:37 CDT
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aw i really like this! there are many fics out there like it but something seems diff bout urs. keep it up
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Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 14:45 CDT
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EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK Up--date SOON. Oh...... THe story is ... GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 02:27 CDT
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oooo. not bad. please make it happy? i don't much like sad stories. keep up the good work! and update! soon!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 23:43 CDT
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update quickly, i hate cliffhangers!!!Good story by the way. LOL
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 12:51 CDT
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This is good so far, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Definately better than my own work. Keep up the good work.
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Title: "Alone"
Reviewed By: nightmagic17 On: October 05, 2003 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writting is excellent. It is very good. You have a strong start and i hope u stick whith story and finish it. I think this is going to be so good. Please update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Kissi21 On: October 04, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Keep going. What's going to happen next?
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Reviewed By: Ayame_wolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 12:08 CDT
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I think you should post more of this story i want to see what happens. 10/10
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm sounds good,and please more chapters,or make it longer.Any way good story!
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Reviewed By: DarkAya On: October 04, 2003 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the beggining very much, hope you can keep it up
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Reviewed By: GuardianWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the set up please continue... I want to see where you take this
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Reviewed By: dragonrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 23:53 CDT
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youve got a good start... a good lead in... two notes... one try to lengthen your chapters so that there is more substance to each of them... and two... the authors name is Rumiko Takahashi...
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